She thought it a very strange sensation
Watching the man on platform 5
Then she pushed him in front of the 1505 express
That pretty blond girl with the selfie stick
The one that every guy desires, yeah, that one
She stabbed her seven times
It felt so real, her head was buzzing
Her nagging neighbour
She could see herself choking the life out of her
God, what a high
The ex-boyfriend who called her the bitch from hell
The garden fork entered his neck
Take those words back, she screamed
She realised the fork in his neck was stopping him from speaking
She pulled it out, he seemed like he was sorry alright
What euphoria, it was like her subconscious was in total overdrive
She watched as ten police cars screamed to a halt outside her building
Jesus, what crazy bastard are they after this time
She couldn’t wait to see who it was
The excitement was overwhelming….
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Author:
Paul Bell (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 1st, 2021 10:36
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments3
Omg it was so vivid
I felt watching a crime movie
So realistic
Well crafted dear poet
You just created a beautiful play
I don't want to play the boyfriend.
Deep,dark and thought provoking.
Love:
"...It felt so real, her head was buzzing
Her nagging neighbour..."
She doesn't nag any more. lol
this one had me on the edge of my seat, and absolutely loved the ending. great work, really enjoyed this one!
Glad you enjoyed it, Robin.
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