Let These Words Speak For Themselves
In a worried world filled
with such
bustle and rush
Like frantic bees upon
a teasel playing ..
Each with their pollen
pockets primed
and likewise filled
to the very
point of overflowing ..
Pray leave them
well alone my friend
Don't dare to
overthink a single one
Oh yes indeed
In a worried world filled
with such
bustle and rush
just let these words speak
for themselves
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Such wise advice in this read today Nev. Explaining clearly your words on finding ways through rush to peace means we leave the fanatic and avoid over-thinking those with differing opinions - maybe......x
Can't thank you enough Fay ....................................................... x
'Each with their pollen
pockets primed
and likewise filled
to the very
point of overflowing ..'
these poem, just exudes
your poetic class, my friend
so subtle, ever
so majestically subtle..
you deliver that arrowed incision of insightful commentary
with the practised ease, of a Supreme wordsmith..
(I read and learn, dear Poet
and Proud, to call myself a fan)
Thank you L.B for blowing my trumpet ................. I really can not thank you enough though .. N
Peace and wellbeing is my mantra of the last few weeks and looks like continuing for some time. Away from any human contact, except delivery drivers, peace comes along easily.
Very calming words to be taken onboard.
You must do what you feel, want and know you must do ................................. thanks though my friend .. always appreciated ............................................ N
I really look at up at your works
So refined and majestic
With few lines they convey such a powerful message
The present scenario with an advice
Well crafted dear poet
Many thanks my very kind friend .................. N
Now why, when they say 'Peace and good will to all men' (mankind, that is), does some wag say, 'Who is Will? And why's he being good to everyone?' I dunno these things. lol.
I dunno neither ... 🙂
Neville,
Your penned words do speak for themselves and I appreciate what they’re communicating to yours truly.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
You my fine friend are more than welcome .............. and far too kind you are too .................. 🙂 🌻 x
Nice read ) makes me think of those people busy getting everything they want , and more … too busy to stop and reflect . just how I maybe interpreted it anyhow . Or just try and stay in peace despite what may be going on around you . There is a sense of comfort in your words
I think you have a good eye and there's nowt wrong with your interpretation .. thank you too yellowrose for those kind words of yours .. they truly mean a lot to this old fella ..... N
Bustle and rush to where? absolute futility....Nah I've already made this post too long - I should just take the advice provided in your last two lines.
Thanks Nev.
Thank You sir ............................................................. good to hear you are opening up out there .. am hoping to pop over next year ......... ......................... N
May those words reach all ears and peace and joy will return to our world.
Andy
Now that would be a fine thing ............. let's keep our fingers and feathers crossed ........... N 🙂
When wisdom speaks.
.......... absolutely ... and I thank you kindly ... Neville
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