Silhouette

spilleronsheet

Catching up the train 

being late again 

it was the same story

everyday again and again 

but this day was different 

marked to be different 

rushing past the security gates 

swapping the travel card beside 

rushed to get into the metro inside 

hope she could catch up the missing train 

it was already late for college again 

As the doors closed by 

she closed her eyes 

the gates would hit her shoulders 

she thought 

and felt a shiver inside 

though the gates would retrieve 

but readers you know 

how hard the door hits 

lost in her thoughts of being hit again 

a hand pulled her inside 

she still with closed eyes

heard the stranger’s deep voice 

he was giving her a lesson 

to be careful in life

she nodded in embarrassment inside

in two minutes of travel 

she couldn’t look at his eyes 

lost in his deep voice 

the time she mustered up courage 

to thank her saviour 

he was already gone amidst the crowd

leaving for his destination 

all she could see

was a silhouette 

a broad shoulder 

with a loose school bag 

a beanie cap 

and grandma’s knit sweater 

that was all

That could be seen

Of her saviour 

Getting down the next station

Alas to be never seen again

was it a dream or a reality 

she questioned herself inside 

But that silhouette remains afresh 

In hopes of finding him 

she still misses the train

maybe a hand might pull inside 

but the silhouette

was never seen again 

time passes by 

While the silhouette fades with time 

 

 

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 2nd, 2021 09:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Metro journeys are quite fun and a lot of stories are made here guided from heaven….
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • Paul Bell

    Sometimes your angel is on board to look after you. Always feel we're on earth for something, just can't figure what it is.

    • spilleronsheet

      Yes that’s true Paul
      For some it’s a moment, for some the whole life only to realise what purpose we are alive for

    • Neville


      Great title for a super posting .. hooked me from the off and played me till the very end .............. I am rapidly becoming an angel fan ..

      • spilleronsheet

        Thank you so much Neville….

      • Fay Slimm.

        Wow - Was so drawn by the story am hoping that shadowy shape will show up again one day to rescue the lady - great read and thanks for sharing.

        • spilleronsheet

          Thank you dear Fay
          I am glad you liked it

        • Goldfinch60

          Super words spilleronsheet, it is so surprising and so wonderful that there are people in this world that will help others for a fleeting moment never to be seen again. There is much good in our world but we only ever hear about the bad.

          Andy

          • spilleronsheet

            Very true Andy
            We must be optimistic
            It’s very odd someday I feel privileged to be existing and at times the existence causes pain…



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