Muse in my view

Poetic Dan

Hellos and good-byes 

hugs and smiles 

All here then gone

Nothing last for long 

 

Enjoy the hit when it comes

Ride the waves in the low

Every thought matters

Liquidating back to one 

 

Endlessly endeavours 

Blinking on and off

Each motion just a grain 

Of a glassless roof 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 7th, 2021 03:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: I was half in a good place on my morning off! Now I'm back to it and all that jazz, no rest for the wicked!
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  • Saxon Crow

    I hear that! Good one Dan

  • Caring dove

    Good poem Dan .. especially like the last verse 🙂

  • dusk arising

    Great pictures Dan, That little beauty is growing up fast... now to the poetry....

    Take it as it comes, It never lasts for long, it changes or is gone or something out of the blue changes you.
    I'd like to sit by the ocean and watch it's consistency. Once again absorbing insignificance... but i'm housebound just now, health reasons

  • Lorna

    Makes me want to sit down and do nothing and just think....... got to get going though.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good words Dan but the good 'hits' will always outweigh the bad ones.

    Andy

  • L. B. Mek

    wise words indeed, sometimes
    fleeting be the theme, to life
    and yet, I can close my eyes
    and still remember that scent
    of a perfect day at the beach
    from childhood's memory reels, while
    I can't recall what I was doing
    this time last week, maybe
    we have more choice: than we think...
    (a wonderfully nostalgic depiction
    of how quickly that guaranteed change, in existence
    warps our sense of fulfilment)
    a great write!
    thanks for sharing dear Poet



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