Around
And woven throughout
Runs the green ribbon
Of early Spring
Of new leaves
Of daisy chains on downy brows of youth
And in those days
Of enough green
To tie together young hearts
And hopeful hands
With verdant tendrils
Looking down we cry in pain
As they turn brown
-
Author:
Lorna (
Offline) - Published: November 7th, 2021 10:07
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 60
- Users favorite of this poem: spilleronsheet
Offline)
Comments7
Lovely write 🙂
Lovely wordplay surrounding this metaphor of young love.
Life in a flash, and if one is not careful that's exactly how it goes. The in between and the journey moving forwards, and the part we hate talking about.
May the green of Nature be forever in the background of Nature's Artwork Lorna.
Andy
Hats off
To the changing seasons
The golden brown surrounds
But your poetry kept me fresh
Maybe it’s the start of a new challenge though the season is in process of rotting
always enjoy it, when I read
about season's, the total opposite
of what we're currently experiencing
it's a wonderful way
to ascertain our hope's
that, the sunshine in our lives
is but a gentle breeze, away...
thanks for sharing
a wonderful read
What a fantastic poem. I do so appreciate your ability to convey a message of life and love.
Thanks James for reading - I'm so glad you like.....
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.