intimacy

dusk arising

in the beguiling world of intimacy
where less can be so much more
your soft warm curves laid beside me
sates the beating within my core

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  • Garth Rakumakoe

    Less is so much more at times. This poem proves it. Lush. Sensual. Simple. It's admirable.

  • spilleronsheet

    So romantic dear poet
    Few lines drew a lovely scene
    I felt I was near a beach

  • kitty the naughty poet

    Beautiful words. Short and sweet 🙂

  • orchidee

    Glad someone's having fun, if it's not me! lol. It brings on a swoon for me. heehee.

  • Lorna

    There is absolutely something so safe about the right body being close.....

  • L. B. Mek

    (after those few, nervous
    first few time's
    we soon forget, just how sacred
    a gift
    we experience, when we become close
    to someone
    whose proximity, is enough
    to fulfil: our every desire...)
    a succinct, but nuanced exposition of the true meaningful worth
    in that universally shared concept
    of intimacy;
    and as-ever wonderfully penned, Dusk
    a great shorty!

  • Paul Bell

    Four lines that speak volumes.
    You just need someone beside you.

  • Vamsi Sudha

    Very Sensual , but conveyed awesomely !! Indeed your 4 lines speak 40 lines 🙂

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful words and thoughts d a.

    Andy



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