in the beguiling world of intimacy
where less can be so much more
your soft warm curves laid beside me
sates the beating within my core
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dusk arising (
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Less is so much more at times. This poem proves it. Lush. Sensual. Simple. It's admirable.
So romantic dear poet
Few lines drew a lovely scene
I felt I was near a beach
Beautiful words. Short and sweet 🙂
Glad someone's having fun, if it's not me! lol. It brings on a swoon for me. heehee.
There is absolutely something so safe about the right body being close.....
(after those few, nervous
first few time's
we soon forget, just how sacred
a gift
we experience, when we become close
to someone
whose proximity, is enough
to fulfil: our every desire...)
a succinct, but nuanced exposition of the true meaningful worth
in that universally shared concept
of intimacy;
and as-ever wonderfully penned, Dusk
a great shorty!
Four lines that speak volumes.
You just need someone beside you.
Very Sensual , but conveyed awesomely !! Indeed your 4 lines speak 40 lines 🙂
Beautiful words and thoughts d a.
Andy
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