Blue Eyes

Lorna



I remember the blue

Turning my way

It's not that there was anything

Particular to say

A gaze with a hook

That reeled me in

And a lasso round my heart

The hook remains

My heart still constricted

By the loss of you

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  • Lorna

    I'm not exactly "moving on" am I Teddy. Don't want to.....

  • Accidental Poet

    Very very beautiful Lorna. Those eyes watch over you with forever love. A smile will show your love in return. πŸ˜‰

  • dusk arising

    The one who was "the love of your life" will stay in your heart, your soul forever.

  • Garth Rakumakoe

    Pregnant with so much sentiment . The heart never forgets indeed. It's beautiful.

  • Nicholas Browning

    A thoughtful poem written with much care. Best regards Lorna ~

  • spilleronsheet

    It’s sad and so touching
    Your close one looks at you from above
    While you cherish the memories
    Look the sky is volutes by the lovely blue
    Even today he/she gazes with blue eyes at you
    Very touching dear poet

  • L. B. Mek

    'A gaze with a hook
    That reeled me in
    And a lasso round my heart
    The hook remains'..
    (some 'hook's
    are our blessings, in life
    gift's, that surpass the hurt
    they're tethered - to
    designed, to anchor our heart's
    to all the love
    we've been lucky enough
    to experience;
    however steep, their burden
    on our lives...!)
    thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
    a heart-wrenchingly, sincere and succinct
    wording of majestic: Poetry!

  • Paul Bell

    That's a lovely, moving poem that's goes straight to the core.

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful loving words Lorna, that hook will reel you in once again and you will be together once more for eternity.

    Andy



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