Doubt

Will Kevin

When i raise my head,

the horizon is clear.

When i look inside of me,

my soul is like a clear lake.

When i start to fear,

it turns to a drop and falls in this lake,

it then send small tiny waves,

and this troubles my soul.

Mother nature, you created this feeling and men gave it a name..."doubt"

  • Author: Quinn\'sfav1 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 8th, 2021 15:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Will Kevin

    Please i want to get better and know where i am on this ladder so i please be frank

  • Paul Bell

    I like it. When mother nature bubbles, beware.

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    I like this poem ) everyone wants to feel calm and balanced in their centre in a nice place like that clear lake )

  • Goldfinch60

    May that doubt soon be smoothed out and the lake shines like a mirror once more.

    Welcome to MPS.

  • orchidee

    Good write Will. I doubt I will dislike this poem! heehee.
    Yes, doubts can be small - hopefully.
    But - more fear, more doubt?



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