Waiting For What.

Goldfinch60



So what is happening?

What is happening on the estate,

The estate where I live?

I drive from my road,

As I join the main road

HE is standing there.

Several times I have seen HIM,

Standing in the same place.

Black jacket, dark grey trousers,

White shirt and black tie,

Immaculately dressed.

Just standing there and waiting.

Is he waiting for the hearse

To direct it the right way?

Or is he death just standing and waiting?

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: November 10th, 2021 02:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: He is waiting.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 51
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Comments7

  • dusk arising

    Haven't we all been there at one stage of our life. That repetative boring queue for a bus or waiting for a lift or even a well dressed bus-spotter!
    I bet postmen/women can be accused of the same, even the same clothes.

    • Goldfinch60

      Very true d a, I wonder?

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Yes, real exciting - a bus-spotter! lol.
      I see an odd chap dressed in suit and bowler hat often. Don't know where he goes.

      • Goldfinch60

        Bus spotter - not dressed like that.

        Andy

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ha - - A sample of what curiosity we poets possess dear Andy - - now you have me wanting to know why and what for that fellow was waiting.

        • Goldfinch60

          You will not have to wait long Fay, I will answer it today.

          Andy

        • Garth Rakumakoe

          The glass is half full or empty depending how one perceives this figure of man. Ominous, or inspiring.

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true Garth, we shall see.

            Andy

          • Doggerel Dave

            Are you starting to weird up, Andy? this is the second piece on unexplained phenomena you have presented recently.... Starting to worry a little....

            • Goldfinch60

              Well if you have known Orchi as long as I have you tend to get this way. LOL

              Andy

              • Doggerel Dave

                Oh come on - give Orchi a break - he's trying to decide whether he should become a Messiah - leader of a new religion. Tough call.

              • Jon Nakapalau

                Every once in awhile you read a poem and you just smile - thanks Andy.

                • Goldfinch60

                  If I have made you smile Jon my words have not failed, thank you.

                  Andy

                • spilleronsheet

                  Such a deep thought left behind about the stranger who stands all while
                  A mirage to the eyes
                  Is he still alive
                  Well crafted dear poet
                  But now curiosity runs in our mind

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you spilleronsheet, I will give the answer today.

                    Andy

                    • spilleronsheet

                      That’s great dear Andy
                      The readers await your answer in a poetry



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