The poem I put on here yesterday left you wondering who the person was. He worked for an undertaker and was waiting to direct the hearse onto the estate where I live. The thing was though that I have seen him several times recently and was wondering why.
This one is different.
I look up to the sky,
The grey clouds above me
Bringing dullness to many.
But I look again and see it,
See that hole in the clouds
Shining brightness on me,
Brightness on my life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: There is always light in my life.
- Category: Reflection
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- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments7
Good write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
We only have to look and it's always there. Good one GF
So very true SC.
Andy
Finding that hole in grey and seeing the blue is worth all the looking dear Andy - - hope too that the undertaker's lad for a while keeps his distance from your sight my friend.
Thank you Fay, yes we must always look for the brightness in our lives.
Andy
Ohhhh
That’s a deep insight
May he look but always brightness on you
No darkness shall crouch upon
I pray the God’s residing in heaven
Thank you spilleronsheet, My Spirit is always with me no matter how dark it may be.
Andy
An opening into the forever.
Very true d a.
Andy
reads like a hymn, devoid of religious connotations,
a prayer of hope
in there being something meaningful to life
beyond the abundance of strife;
just beyond those brooding clouds in our lives,
thanks for sharing Andy
Thank you Mek, there is always meaning to life beyond our time on earth.
Andy
Let that brightness be ever there for you Andy
Thank you TKKKK, I know that brightness will always be there for me.
Andy
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