Lawnsome
Though much more a meadow than a lawn
Pray leave the grass alone she cried
Tis where my friends, wee beasties hide
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a perfect Faikhu .................. so faikhu very much for taking a peek :)
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What the Faik is a faikhu?
Though much more a snatch than a patch
Pray leave the pubes alone she cried
Tis where my friend's (note the apostrope) wee crabbies hide.
I need to go for a long walk I think. This lockdown shielding has been going on too long for me and it's starting to.......
a faikhu is a poetic form I developed & arranged the copywrite for around the millennium along with the mocku both are close approximations to the precise syllable counted haiku & senryu .. apostrophe noted .. enjoy that walk you old sausage ................................................................ 🙂
Your'e aggravating my dyslexia, Nev - dodgy haikus fook it up completely.
Great environmental message there though.
Kudos to dusk's little effort - that one is going on the back of the next bog door I can find. Kudos also to you for the inspiration...
he is indeed an inspiration .............. and thanks for taking note mate ............................... N 🙂
Is this a new invention? I thought so.
"Pray" seems a high frequency word recently.
just between myself and myself and me, I did develop the concept my friend ............... cheers for asking .. pray you are both safe and well ............... N
Interesting poetry
What is faikhu?
thank you for considering my little scrib ... please see above note for the answer to your query .. N
Ohhhhh
I shall
That reminds me - I still need to cut the lawn. LOL
Andy
tis the first cut is the deepest ...................... and remember, its the early bird that gets the worm ... 🙂
we need to find a way to heal your feud with that plague of a 'haiku'
(why, bless you) lol
I am such a stickler when it comes to preciseness ... the haikhu & the mocku were an attempt to help those who could not bend their own pen and mental muscle around true forms, find a way out .. Bless you too & truly L.B ....................................... N
I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me - - -glad I caught this little example of approximate alternative and faiku for sharing it .........x
honesty will get you anywhere ya wanna be lovely lady .. and its plain to see there's nowt faikhu about you ........................................................................... N x
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