Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars

Neville

Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars

 

She was just so damn good

to look at

But even more fascinating to watch

and observe

Yes, the sight and the sound of her

moving like that

Held fast within those vertical bars

Each one of them

individually amazing and somehow

crazily aligned

Not to mention her spectacular and

elsewise, offset

amorphous and horizontal curves ..

 

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Comments9

  • Fay Slimm.

    Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even better -- - Fank yu dear Sir - loving this take on the voyeur.......x

    • Neville



      pulsing is one word I so wanted to include here Fay ......................... but couldn't for some reason that now eludes me ................................................. keep checking in my lovely .. each page is so much better for the mark you leave behind ............................................... Neville x

    • Doggerel Dave

      That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind bars, Nev.

      Beautifully paced work.

      • Neville



        well that's another way of looking at it ..................... cheers DD ............. N

      • dusk arising

        Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling cat.

        • Neville



          ............................... purrfectly put ...................... cheers mate .. 🙂

        • L. B. Mek

          when, we can admire
          and respect, feat's of prowess
          aside, beauty's - grace
          and prioritise our appreciation of each: equally
          we earn the right, to consider ourselves
          Men
          and not merely,
          testosterone addled, boys...
          (subtly, delivering
          insightful commentary
          on those
          real life: 'Pandora box' themes
          few of us, have the temerity
          to even consider, in private
          let alone, verse
          so relatable
          and unashamedly, Public)
          thanks for sharing, dear masterful Poet

          • Neville



            ............................... bless you L.B ........................................................................... Neville 🙂

          • Garth Rakumakoe

            Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It's an attractive work of art sir.

            • Neville



              Well blow me down .. how very kind you are Garth .. Many bloomin thank you's now heading your way sir ......................................................................... Neville

            • orchidee

              Ahh, a poem about a bird in a cage - the feathered variety of bird?! lol.

              • Neville



                almost very nearly ......................... cheers Mr. O & truly ........................................... N 🙂

              • myself and me

                Holy bars.

                • Neville



                  ......................... sounds like one of Mr. O's sheep have got loose ............................. cheers for taking part in this particular poetic exercise M & M ............. much appreciated my friend .. N 🙂

                • MendedFences27

                  Sorry, I can't tell who, what, or where "she" is, but that doesn't mean this isn't the most stimulating and enticing bit of poetry I have read in a while. Please don't explain your intent here for I wish to mull over this for a while and will save it for future exploration. A dazzling blend of perfectly selected wordings. Instantly entertaining and challenging to the reader. I've read it several times and each time find something new to think about, Just great. - Phil A.

                  • Neville



                    You have just made my day Phil & its still too early to be thinking of getting getting out of bed even .. Thank you so very much my friend ............................ Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Intriguing words and visualisations Neville.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      what could possibly be better my friend ................ thank you so very muchly indeed .. Neville 🙂



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