Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars
She was just so damn good
to look at
But even more fascinating to watch
and observe
Yes, the sight and the sound of her
moving like that
Held fast within those vertical bars
Each one of them
individually amazing and somehow
crazily aligned
Not to mention her spectacular and
elsewise, offset
amorphous and horizontal curves ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even better -- - Fank yu dear Sir - loving this take on the voyeur.......x
pulsing is one word I so wanted to include here Fay ......................... but couldn't for some reason that now eludes me ................................................. keep checking in my lovely .. each page is so much better for the mark you leave behind ............................................... Neville x
That tiger should be out in the forest, properly protected, not behind bars, Nev.
Beautifully paced work.
well that's another way of looking at it ..................... cheers DD ............. N
Dress a lady in vertical bars to accentuate her curves. A real prowling cat.
............................... purrfectly put ...................... cheers mate .. 🙂
when, we can admire
and respect, feat's of prowess
aside, beauty's - grace
and prioritise our appreciation of each: equally
we earn the right, to consider ourselves
Men
and not merely,
testosterone addled, boys...
(subtly, delivering
insightful commentary
on those
real life: 'Pandora box' themes
few of us, have the temerity
to even consider, in private
let alone, verse
so relatable
and unashamedly, Public)
thanks for sharing, dear masterful Poet
............................... bless you L.B ........................................................................... Neville 🙂
Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It's an attractive work of art sir.
Well blow me down .. how very kind you are Garth .. Many bloomin thank you's now heading your way sir ......................................................................... Neville
Ahh, a poem about a bird in a cage - the feathered variety of bird?! lol.
almost very nearly ......................... cheers Mr. O & truly ........................................... N 🙂
Holy bars.
......................... sounds like one of Mr. O's sheep have got loose ............................. cheers for taking part in this particular poetic exercise M & M ............. much appreciated my friend .. N 🙂
Sorry, I can't tell who, what, or where "she" is, but that doesn't mean this isn't the most stimulating and enticing bit of poetry I have read in a while. Please don't explain your intent here for I wish to mull over this for a while and will save it for future exploration. A dazzling blend of perfectly selected wordings. Instantly entertaining and challenging to the reader. I've read it several times and each time find something new to think about, Just great. - Phil A.
You have just made my day Phil & its still too early to be thinking of getting getting out of bed even .. Thank you so very much my friend ............................ Neville
Intriguing words and visualisations Neville.
Andy
what could possibly be better my friend ................ thank you so very muchly indeed .. Neville 🙂
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