Just breathe, a little less Poem, by hopeforthehopeless, at My poetic side

Notice of absence from depressionofbecca
Taking a Mental Health Leave. I don't know when I will publish next.

I'm struggling to breathe

I really cant

There's something tied around my neck

I know what it is, I put it there

I look at my watch

12:23 am

How much longer will I have to be here

Hang here

Hang here by my neck

I inhale again

This could be it

My last breath

I wait

12:25 am

Another breath

Another second away from eternity

Tick tock tick tock tick tock

My vision is hazy, foggy

I cant breathe now

I check my watch one last time

12:26 am

I look straight

At nothing

Suddenly a tear runs down my face

One stray tear

I'm sorry

Comments +

Garth Rakumakoe November 16th, 2021 10:01
An almost lethal affliction, I can only imagine, when one has no desire to go on... Very sad, and soberly depicted. Very real.
- depressionofbeccaNovember 16th, 2021 10:04
  Thank you its from my real expirences. It really is hard and thats why im away from home.
Paul Bell November 16th, 2021 11:26
A lot of people will relate to this, and a lot of people have ended this way. Hopefully you can help others on your journey of hope.
- depressionofbeccaNovember 16th, 2021 11:46
  Thank you thats the reason i write these to help others

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