Unsincerely Yours
She never did say goodbye, or post him
those letters she claimed
to have laboured and lost so much sleep over
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Neville (
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I know - KP wrote me some letters when she was away having Botox (I'm cruel to her. lol) She said they got lost in the post, but I doubt it.
KP .. your nuts or somebody else 's ....................................... for sure 🙂
There's a lot to be said for a clean and final ending. Often an exchange of iffs buts and maybes is nothing more than a time wasting pre-cursor of the inevitable anyway. Save them for the dream world, it's less painful.
I sincerely thank you DA for keeping me in the frame sir ........ Neville
I don't know, dear Poet
if life has taught me anything,
its to treasure
the sharp, permanent goodbyes
seemingly overnight;
where as those murky, elongated separations
with their left-over bruises
that linger
only frustrate, for longer..
(somehow at just the title
I was already irked, by the memory's
it made me recall, names
I had imagined forgotten
waiting, in my mind's lost box
to prick, those rummaging tendrils
trying, to meaninglessly - recall)
another great shorty, and one
I'm sure quite a few can relate to
another much appreciated visit accompanied as always with its own thought provoking footprint .. cheers L.B .... N
Indifference walks off and can leave often - methinks good riddance to deliberate and insincere behaviour - -- get wise to those who may never say a simple goodbye - -- dunno why Nev but this for me was a right-rousing read ................x
thanks Fay ........................................ lessons learnt eh'.................................... maybe 🙂 x
Another imprint you left
Some words untold
Some buried inside
Some knots never opened
Some untended wound
Never knew
Never understood in life
But they hurt the most
The uncalled goodbyes
I would copywrite that review note of yours up there before some one nicks it ............. bless you my friend for that delightful & generous gift .... Neville
That isn't a poem. That's just a sentence.
Poetry, like any other art form is much like beauty .. subjective .. in effect, in the eye of the individual beholder and whilst everyone is entitled to their own opinion of course, I welcome all comments, so thank you for yours ..
No it isn't. Poetry by definition requires meter, structure, and rhyme.
That is a prose sentence.
Thanks for destroying the art.
Why does poetry have to rhyme ? I never rhyme , I dislike it
of course it doesn't have to rhyme .. it does of course require structure of some form or another, but that may be determined by the particular style of poem, some of which are very strict while others are not so .. Many other factors including those of a historical and or cultural nature might also come in to play .. it seems to me our young so called quantum physics student is just trying to sound cool or make a name for himself .. but is really a bit of an antagonist prat ..
I gotta meet her again! I can't stand it without her!
I mean this lass - not KP - I can't live WITH her! lol.
Do shut up sometimes Orchi. lol.
you are the first masochistic Guinea-pig I have come across in quite some time Mr. O .. just dont say I didn't warn ya ......................................................................................................N 🙂
Heehee! Aww, and they are such nice critters!
Oh, bother.
Yep .. it happens, thanks for noticing M &M .. & thank goodness for an imagination too eh' my friend ... N 🙂
Maybe I'm just not that deep - I've lingered with past relationship for years....... Know how to say a quick final goodbye when the need arises, though....
good to hear DD because I also hear you can't teach an old dog new tricks ..................... ta tho and truly .. Neville
Emotive words Neville but the trust could never have been there.
Andy
... you can beat an egg (sorry) but you just can't beat a bit of emotive now can ya .. but ya can beans ... funny that ............................................................. and ta for taking part GF60 🙂
But maybe she smiles to herself at thought of him. 🤔
.................. maybe, just maybe ....................................... maybe .... 🙂 cheers AP ... Neville
I'll take a maybe anytime, thanks N. 😉
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