Address; Heaven
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C/o. Gods complaint dept. URGENT///URGENT///URGENT///
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Dear God,
I will never forget my grief,that grief I never asked for,therefore my inheritance,it comes with the package I guess,a package deal,per say. Well i'v gotta say,...I'm not impressed.But it's not just that grief,you know the one,..it's about everyday struggles. Why did you have to make life so hard?
When you gave us free will,was that not a mistake on your part? For we are but little children,we shouldn't be left to cause the destruction that we have,and will continue to cause.
It seems we are giving up on our home,are we not closer to finding new worlds to colonize(and probably destroy)then we are to finding solutions for OUR problems here on OUR world? If we can achieve what we have achieved,..THE STARS FOR GOD SAKE!!! Our greatest achievement.(yet we know more about them than we do our own oceans)
Do we not possess the intellectual capabilities to do what's right,see!! A perfect example,what's right?Who knows?Nobody,and as far as I'm concerned nobody ever will as long as we have free will that allows us to say what's right and wrong. What's right for some isn't always right for others◀️See? LIFE HARD!!!argh😾Grrrr😠
Should OUR objective not be to find solutions for OUR problems here on OUR world,rather than take OUR problems to OTHER worlds? And let us not forget about world peace,how far along are we on that issue? Why does life have to be so hard for us?
I do acknowledge the beauty of your creation,and the creations of Mother Nature who was created by you. And I'm guessing you gave her free will as well,because she can be pretty destructive at times,but that's her bone. But why so hard? I understand we need to struggle,but why so much?
It just seems,your choice to give us our choice isn't working out to well for us.I ask,WHERE ARE YOU GOD?
Now back to that grief,you know the one,it's the biggest bone I have to pick with you.So here it is GOD!
And I quote, "For that grief,for all that grief I will never,ever,ever,ever forget,..if you ever grant me passage through the gates of heaven,and I find myself face to face with you,I swear,I'm kicking you right in the crotch,.............
.....twice. I don't want you thinking it was a mistake."
P.s.,although i'v always said I could never hit one,if it turns out your female,..well just for you I'll be willing to make an exception.
Thank you God,I look forward to your extremely desired reply. Please reply A.S.A.P.
P.S.S. I sincerely hope not to feel this way if and when the time comes. sincerely; W.J.Gerhardt.,aka/FallenAngel1🕊
- Author: W.J.G.🕊 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 20th, 2021 01:31
- Comment from author about the poem: This was supposed to be much shorter,but some how it just ballooned. It's a mix of satire regarding my anger towards God over the death of my mother,2003 and my very best friend in life,2020,and reflection upon weather or not we're on the right path in our journey of life, I hope you enjoy and I look forward to your comments 🤗🕊✌️
- Category: Letter
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Comments3
I found it. Wasn’t on page three though. Well written. Grief is not easy.
I’m so sorry Sharon,this isn’t it . It is the very first poem on page 3. It’s titled “Ed The Head” I’d really like an opinion on it. Im a little worried about the beginning of it. I’m afraid some might find it a little insensitive.
I can understand why you blame God,but the devil rules here and hell,he is the one to rightfully blame for all of the evil,and wickedness,yes,we all must suffer,we were born in sin, besides, Jesus paid the ultimate price, His life for ours, imagine, just close your eyes and imagine a world without God at all, what did you see,a place with no love, no beauty, nobody friendly EVER, just chaos and carnage everywhere you look,but Jesus is coming very soon to bring an end to Satan's rule and bring peace, love,hope back here forever,.
You obviously believe in God, really picture what life would look like without God
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