An All Too Familiar Modus
Oh’ you poor wee man
you’ve got it bad don’t you ..
Does she call you luv and
cry at every opportunity ..
Does she claim to burn candles
and say prayers for you too ..
Does she then throw them
all back in your face ..
Well it seems she does to all of us
don’t blame yourself though ..
She will do that for you
without a shadow of a doubt ..
Take my word, it won’t be long
soon you will be well and truly done ..
And then, when she has had her fill
you will no doubt, be discarded too ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: .. take my word for it, you most definitely wouldn't ..
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Some people don’t care enough , and just think about themselves in a selfish way … not caring about others feelings
How very true .. thank you yellowrose ..................................... Stay well .. AGT's .. Neville
But I met her, and hoped it would all work out OK. lol
Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
I somehow just knew that you wouldn't take my word for it ............................ 🙂
Seems often the misled mislead those who being vulnerable believe too easily - - great example here Nev. of finding out a bit too late that all is not fair in love or war................x
.. it happens dunnit ............................................. bless ya our Fay .. x
Sadly there are quite a few like this in both sexes - great piece.
I concur sir .............................................................. thank you Michael .. & so good to see you my friend .. N
You've been reading my diaries again Neville.
if ya leave em laying around like that surrounded by LED lights and a bloomin BIG fluorescent arrow pointing at them underneath the sign which says ENTER ... who aint gonna take a peek eh .................................................. 🙂
Ohhh
That happens
Only if sooner we could realise before being badly hurt inside
Alas love is unpredictable and blind
the funny thing is .. maybe that's one of the many reasons we find it so very compelling ... thank you for such a considered & poetic response to my little scribble spilleronsheet ... Neville
Where was yer British reserve? Well for them as hasn't got it , a cautionary tale.
..................... Thanks Dave 🙂
The praying mantis lover. Apparently their kind are the most irresistible. The drawing flame, whose heat burns the most.
What an excellent analogy Garth ... thank you my friend ................ Neville
Very familiar, but those who was in it all thought they were different and special.
absolutely .............................................................................................................................. 🙂
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