somehow something

dusk arising

 

somehow something i do has upset the world we knew
we no longer talk
and everyday's thoughts
now take a turn to deep blue

 

somehow something you do enlightens each page every day
now every word
has me feeling absurd
searching for something to say

 

     i never thought so much of so little
     those games we once played
     no never a thought but i'm caught in the middle
     of the act we have staged

 

somehow something we've shared reassures from your eyes
with you understanding
never demanding
or reason our will to survive

 

      i never thought so much of so little
      those games we once played
      would one day provide the key to the riddle
      such mistakes we have made

 

somehow something we do lives along and holds us like glue
really amazing
how lifes crazy paving
adheres me to you


   

 

 

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 22nd, 2021 06:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another from a while ago. Was originally a song but of course works lyrically as poetry too.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., spilleronsheet.
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    Simply compellingly good this example of excellent wording that stays in the mind long after the read - - first class poetry Dusk and will be in my faves immediately.

    • dusk arising

      Thank you Fay. My muse dictated this one fine morning. I don't know where some of my stuff comes from.

    • orchidee

      Somehow something is inspiring me to somewhat (or more than somewhat) some time (i.e. now) to like this poem!

    • L. B. Mek

      somehow Dusk, something in your
      choice wording
      has me agreeable to all the things
      you're, relating..
      (a write, worth rereading
      to insure nothings lost
      in a rushed, interpretation)

      • dusk arising

        Thank you LBM, your support means a lot.

      • spilleronsheet

        Firstly I appreciate how aesthetically the lines have been arranged
        Secondly the poetry has such a depth
        I am hooked along the lines
        Somehow something makes me move across different experiences of my life
        Somehow something my mind scans the people around
        The lines I wrote
        Priceless earlier it was
        Why do they sound absurd today
        Dear dusk I resonate with every line of yours

        • dusk arising

          I'm pleased you read into this piece a felt a reality. THis piece is a pure fiction built around the glue both parties want to maintain.

          • spilleronsheet

            Ohhhhhhh
            I get it know dear Dusk

          • Neville


            I am so very impressed with the way you have worded this .. and the way it fits perfectly on the page ..

            • dusk arising

              It's the screen size which does me favours. It looks awful on a 23" monitor.

            • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

              Very engaging poem , dusk 🙂 loved the read

              • dusk arising

                Smiling, I'm pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you.

              • Goldfinch60

                Super write d a, that glue will never fail.

                Andy

                • dusk arising

                  For some the glue is eternal, for me it's been temporary.



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