somehow something i do has upset the world we knew
we no longer talk
and everyday's thoughts
now take a turn to deep blue
somehow something you do enlightens each page every day
now every word
has me feeling absurd
searching for something to say
i never thought so much of so little
those games we once played
no never a thought but i'm caught in the middle
of the act we have staged
somehow something we've shared reassures from your eyes
with you understanding
never demanding
or reason our will to survive
i never thought so much of so little
those games we once played
would one day provide the key to the riddle
such mistakes we have made
somehow something we do lives along and holds us like glue
really amazing
how lifes crazy paving
adheres me to you
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Author:
dusk arising (
Offline) - Published: November 22nd, 2021 06:30
- Comment from author about the poem: Another from a while ago. Was originally a song but of course works lyrically as poetry too.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., spilleronsheet
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Comments7
Simply compellingly good this example of excellent wording that stays in the mind long after the read - - first class poetry Dusk and will be in my faves immediately.
Thank you Fay. My muse dictated this one fine morning. I don't know where some of my stuff comes from.
Somehow something is inspiring me to somewhat (or more than somewhat) some time (i.e. now) to like this poem!
somehow Dusk, something in your
choice wording
has me agreeable to all the things
you're, relating..
(a write, worth rereading
to insure nothings lost
in a rushed, interpretation)
Thank you LBM, your support means a lot.
Firstly I appreciate how aesthetically the lines have been arranged
Secondly the poetry has such a depth
I am hooked along the lines
Somehow something makes me move across different experiences of my life
Somehow something my mind scans the people around
The lines I wrote
Priceless earlier it was
Why do they sound absurd today
Dear dusk I resonate with every line of yours
I'm pleased you read into this piece a felt a reality. THis piece is a pure fiction built around the glue both parties want to maintain.
Ohhhhhhh
I get it know dear Dusk
I am so very impressed with the way you have worded this .. and the way it fits perfectly on the page ..
It's the screen size which does me favours. It looks awful on a 23" monitor.
Very engaging poem , dusk 🙂 loved the read
Smiling, I'm pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you.
Super write d a, that glue will never fail.
Andy
For some the glue is eternal, for me it's been temporary.
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