Neville

Ma Petit Serviette

Ma Petit Serviette

 

To him, she was far more than a waitress ..

to him, she was his petit serviette

who gave of herself

completely

No

questions asked

no blame, nor guilt or doubt

To him, she was his petit serviette, who

gave herself completely, no argument throughout ..

Comments9

  • dusk arising

    I like the way you tease my mind in your recent poetry..... did they, were they.... what was he being served other than breakfast....

    • Neville


      Bonjour mon bon ami et merci beaucoup d’avoir graté ce petit gribouillage avec vos pensées sur la question à portée de main ................................................ Oh' une grande tasse de thé anglais pour le petit-déjeuner ....................................................................... Neville 🙂

    • Teddy.15

      LOL so.which one.was actually the napkin? In this it was her,.but as you poetry always has fabulous twists and turns I'm just being nosey... mercy bookoo. 🤣

      • Neville



        I shall refrain from being any more publicly explicit on the grounds that her husband is a lot younger than moi ...................................................................................................... but thanks for asking 🙂 x

      • Neil Higgins

        Blackpool Nev?
        Got sent there between 3-10,as a punishment for a family holiday.Awful weather,awful food,but lovely people.Three piers,trams to Fleetwood,or Lytham,and that bracing North West wind,figuratively speaking.
        Lovely boarding house however,where we stayed.Family run,who treated me as one of their own "wash the dishes.There's a good lad"
        Thank god for Somerset 😎

        • Neville



          did it have flock wallpaper Neil .. it could have been the very same place mate .. now that would surely be a twist of fate ...................................................... ta and truly kind sir ... N 🙂

        • Doggerel Dave

          Monogrammed, laundered and ironed to perfection (No innuendo intended). Symmetrical perfection, Nev.

          • Neville



            Thank you DD .................................................. N 🙂

          • Robert Haigh

            A lovely hourglass poem, with poetic imagery sifting through it! Nice one Nev!

            • Neville



              Cheers mate .. that'll do just nicely ...................................... N 🙂

            • Fay Slimm.

              Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served without any argument - - like your verse that petit waitress deserves a gurt "merci " for stripping to tease then to please ..........x

              • Neville



                ............... it was one of them one offs Fay ............... and things might well have been so different had she not mistaken one of the interns as me girlfriend .. still, that one off seems to have had something of a lasting impression dunnit ....................................... x

              • orchidee

                Best not tell me what she served without any argument. I will only swoon. Fido says it will be too much for me! lol.

                • Neville



                  mums the word ...................................................................................................... Mr. O 🙂

                • Garth Rakumakoe

                  He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain sight. Everybody saw them, but only he knew about them.

                  • Neville



                    and it was meant to be a secret ............................................................... cheers Garth 🙂

                  • Goldfinch60

                    So you met her as well Neville, I shall say no more........

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      but only for a little while ............................. cheers for noticing my friend .................... Neville



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