An Unmistakable She
Hey, don’t you just love those
lateral flows
and of course, the seamless
flaws of hers
Each horizontal push and pull
Such a
splendid collection of pulses
and probes ..
Hey, don’t you just love the way
she holds her fork,
The unique way she sips her tea
indeed the way
She rolls her R’s for all the world
to hear, to feel
to write about and to taste and see
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: November 25th, 2021 02:12
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments9
Love is obviously in the air Neville.
Andy
why do I get the feeling a little bird told you to say that .................. N π
Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.
You really are nuts about KP aint ya Mr. O ............................................... let it be & let her go .. N π
But I married her - Goldfinch will tell you. I think he was at the wedding! lol.
Nice writing Neville π some people just have such lovely personalities ,
I like how you have worded your poem
thank you yellowrose .. and I very much like what you have just left for me here ............... Neville
There's many a rolling R's to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)
Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.
I love it when ya talk dirty DA ................................... a votre santΓ© my friend ........... N π
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
magic mate ... many thanks indeed .................................... Neville
Methinks your She's are found wanting if R's rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x
your generosity knows no bounds our Fay ........... many thanks thanks consequently headin your way ............................................................. Neville x
lol
the poor lady, in her
eyes
you're enamoured
by her, daintily quirks..
where as
your thought's
are mapping, murderous
intentions...
(ahh, those tinted eyes
of romance)
a fun read, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
.... a nigh on perfect postulation sir ............................. many profound thank you's L.B ... N π
How romantic
Those words of yours
The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
For the words in praise so charming to eyes
reads like a poem .. and a good one at that ... but then you are a poet ... and a good one at that too ... thank you my fine literary friend .................................................... Neville
Well
I donβt know if I am good one
At times i am not that refined but brazen in words
But your words are encouraging
I will surely try to write more better
Thank you so much friend for the intriguing thoughts you put in our mind
Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.
But did Granny know you cared, though?
That is very kind of you Dave .. Not sure mate, I shall go check & get back to ya ................... N π
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