Neville

An Unmistakable She

An Unmistakable She

 

Hey, don’t you just love those

lateral flows

and of course, the seamless

flaws of hers

Each horizontal push and pull

Such a

splendid collection of pulses

and probes ..

Hey, don’t you just love the way

she holds her fork,

The unique way she sips her tea

indeed the way

She rolls her R’s for all the world

to hear, to feel

to write about and to taste and see

Comments12

  • Goldfinch60

    Love is obviously in the air Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville



      why do I get the feeling a little bird told you to say that .................. N πŸ™‚

    • Teddy.15

      Ah, such beauty and appreciation in here dear Neville. Accents can drive us all mad with passion. However once again your intriguingly worded poem could be about many things sometimes I even think your an informatic engineer I've read this 5 times and each time I like it even more, last lines like dancing with Fred Astaire.

      • Neville



        what a lovely thing to suggest my dear Teddy .. I feel as light as a feather & pretty near blown away .. Neville ..

      • orchidee

        Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.

        • Neville



          You really are nuts about KP aint ya Mr. O ............................................... let it be & let her go .. N πŸ™‚

          • orchidee

            But I married her - Goldfinch will tell you. I think he was at the wedding! lol.

          • yellowrose

            Nice writing Neville πŸ™‚ some people just have such lovely personalities ,

            I like how you have worded your poem

            • Neville



              thank you yellowrose .. and I very much like what you have just left for me here ............... Neville

            • dusk arising

              There's many a rolling R's to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)

              Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.

              • Neville



                I love it when ya talk dirty DA ................................... a votre santΓ© my friend ........... N πŸ™‚

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.

                • Neville



                  magic mate ... many thanks indeed .................................... Neville

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Methinks your She's are found wanting if R's rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x

                  • Neville



                    your generosity knows no bounds our Fay ........... many thanks thanks consequently headin your way ............................................................. Neville x

                  • Munro

                    This is a love poem with etiquette ,or something like that Mush lol

                    • Neville



                      .. very fungi sir .. but at least you have good taste ..................... Neville πŸ™‚

                    • L. B. Mek

                      lol
                      the poor lady, in her
                      eyes
                      you're enamoured
                      by her, daintily quirks..
                      where as
                      your thought's
                      are mapping, murderous
                      intentions...
                      (ahh, those tinted eyes
                      of romance)
                      a fun read, thanks for sharing
                      dear Poet

                      • Neville



                        .... a nigh on perfect postulation sir ............................. many profound thank you's L.B ... N πŸ™‚

                      • Neil Higgins

                        "Hey, don’t you just love those
                        lateral flows"
                        Twice a week Nev.And I have had my "booster"
                        😁

                        • Neville



                          Ah' you noticed Neil .. just as well mate, one can't be too careful nowadays, can one .......... keep it up & stay safe my friend ................................................................................................ Neville πŸ™‚

                        • spilleronsheet

                          How romantic
                          Those words of yours
                          The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
                          For the words in praise so charming to eyes

                          • Neville



                            reads like a poem .. and a good one at that ... but then you are a poet ... and a good one at that too ... thank you my fine literary friend .................................................... Neville

                            • spilleronsheet

                              Well
                              I don’t know if I am good one
                              At times i am not that refined but brazen in words
                              But your words are encouraging
                              I will surely try to write more better
                              Thank you so much friend for the intriguing thoughts you put in our mind

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.

                              But did Granny know you cared, though?

                              • Neville



                                That is very kind of you Dave .. Not sure mate, I shall go check & get back to ya ................... N πŸ™‚



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