An Unmistakable She

Neville

An Unmistakable She

 

Hey, don’t you just love those

lateral flows

and of course, the seamless

flaws of hers

Each horizontal push and pull

Such a

splendid collection of pulses

and probes ..

Hey, don’t you just love the way

she holds her fork,

The unique way she sips her tea

indeed the way

She rolls her R’s for all the world

to hear, to feel

to write about and to taste and see

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2021 02:12
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  • Goldfinch60

    Love is obviously in the air Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville



      why do I get the feeling a little bird told you to say that .................. N πŸ™‚

    • orchidee

      Good write N. Is that she who must be obeyed? That might be KP! lol.

      • Neville



        You really are nuts about KP aint ya Mr. O ............................................... let it be & let her go .. N πŸ™‚

        • orchidee

          But I married her - Goldfinch will tell you. I think he was at the wedding! lol.

        • Caring dove

          Nice writing Neville πŸ™‚ some people just have such lovely personalities ,

          I like how you have worded your poem

          • Neville



            thank you yellowrose .. and I very much like what you have just left for me here ............... Neville

          • dusk arising

            There's many a rolling R's to be observed on the high street too. And other feminine whiles are seen in the coffee shop and around the ballroom.... (sighs)

            Your poetry creates visions to stir the morning into life.

            • Neville



              I love it when ya talk dirty DA ................................... a votre santΓ© my friend ........... N πŸ™‚

            • Garth Rakumakoe

              A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.

              • Neville



                magic mate ... many thanks indeed .................................... Neville

              • Fay Slimm.

                Methinks your She's are found wanting if R's rolling is all they can offer amigo - am offering big thank yous though Nev. for the smile this clever write leaves..............x

                • Neville



                  your generosity knows no bounds our Fay ........... many thanks thanks consequently headin your way ............................................................. Neville x

                • L. B. Mek

                  lol
                  the poor lady, in her
                  eyes
                  you're enamoured
                  by her, daintily quirks..
                  where as
                  your thought's
                  are mapping, murderous
                  intentions...
                  (ahh, those tinted eyes
                  of romance)
                  a fun read, thanks for sharing
                  dear Poet

                  • Neville



                    .... a nigh on perfect postulation sir ............................. many profound thank you's L.B ... N πŸ™‚

                  • spilleronsheet

                    How romantic
                    Those words of yours
                    The lady in context keeps high in curiosity
                    For the words in praise so charming to eyes

                    • Neville



                      reads like a poem .. and a good one at that ... but then you are a poet ... and a good one at that too ... thank you my fine literary friend .................................................... Neville

                      • spilleronsheet

                        Well
                        I don’t know if I am good one
                        At times i am not that refined but brazen in words
                        But your words are encouraging
                        I will surely try to write more better
                        Thank you so much friend for the intriguing thoughts you put in our mind

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Beautifully paced , Nev, no - really.

                        But did Granny know you cared, though?

                        • Neville



                          That is very kind of you Dave .. Not sure mate, I shall go check & get back to ya ................... N πŸ™‚



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