spilleronsheet

I wonder

I wonder 

if the universe so large 

how many other earth there would be ?

 

I wonder 

if time dilation 

like interstellar exists 

where I might age at one place 

but remain constant other place 

 

I wonder 

if there is a gravitational redshift 

where the envy of green 

shall be perceived as red love for me 

 

I wonder 

if I could tumble upon a wormhole 

go back correct my mistakes 

go to future 

so I don’t make mistakes 

 

I wonder 

If there is a black hole 

maybe one day we may drown upon 

so that prior we are dropped 

I could do, all I want to do 

 

I wonder 

how dark the universe is 

is it darker than the feelings a human hide 

 

I wonder 

if light travels and bends 

telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose 

 

I wonder 

if there are cosmic jets 

travelling faster than light 

maybe I could ride over it 

travel the universe around 

 

so many wonders I store 

maybe the child isn’t suppressed anymore 

some fantasies aren’t fantasies 

but a reality hidden in clouds….

Comments10

  • Goldfinch60

    That wonder is within all of us Tkkkk.

    Andy

    • spilleronsheet

      It sure is
      And I guess it’s even more in a poet

      • Goldfinch60

        Oops, my mind went you are not Tkkkk, I apologise for my error.

        Andy

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      • Teddy.15

        Most endearing Spills, your first stanza is a perfect question I always ask my self, as for love well it usually punches us on the nose when we least expect for better or worse, a lovely write my friend. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

        • spilleronsheet

          Thanks a lot Teddy
          It sure is
          Love punches hard

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Dear Spiller , this is a Masterpiece in your writeup till date. !!

          You are a person of Expression and Exploration. You have touched on so many science facts, which are real mysteries till date ..

          "I am at awe at your spread of knowledge. These 2 para's touched me straight --

          I wonder
          how dark the universe is
          is it darker than the feelings a human hide

          I wonder
          if light travels and bends
          telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose "

          Fantabulous Expression !!!

          • spilleronsheet

            Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
            I am so happppy that you liked it
            Well your courage pushed up a bid to bloom
            So the seasons you see are dependent on the sun
            To a sunflower like me
            Your my sun glowing in the sky

          • orchidee

            You could take a No.7 bus and find out. It goes to the Milky Way, so I hear! heehee.
            Light is said to be waves and particles. Maybe the particles make up the waves? I'm no scientist though.

            • Vamsi Sudha

              Dear Orchid
              Light always travels in a straight line. This property of light is known as " Rectilinear propagation of light..." !!!

              • orchidee

                Got headache now, reading all this first thing in the morning here in UK! lol.

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              • Neville


                my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is now more than satisfied having been rigorously exercised this morning .. even though we don't yet have all the answers ... there aint nothing to stop us from dreaming .. is there .... a stellar post spilleronsheet and one I feel sure I shall return to and ponder over .... thank you .. Neville

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thanks a lot dear Neville
                  I wished to write something different from what I write
                  Normally mine are sad or reflections
                  But the child in me grows curious when it comes across articles as such
                  The universe is such a mystery that I get lost in there
                  Well
                  I am awaiting a poetry soon from you

                  • Neville



                    ....................... You are much more than merely welcome .. much much more, I can assure you ...

                  • Paul Bell

                    I would be surprised if there wasn't life elsewhere. Our earth is pretty perfect, as if it was built that way. Mind you, at the end of life at the mistake reading, got a feeling the line will be long.

                    • spilleronsheet

                      Ohhhh
                      So you liked it ?

                      • Paul Bell

                        Yeah, I live sci fi

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                      • L. B. Mek

                        just needs a little editing
                        but otherwise, this is a brilliant write! dear poet
                        sci-fi, poetry at its captivatingly wondrous - finest, lol
                        'when we loose our capacity
                        to wonder and dream
                        humanity's finality: begins'

                        • spilleronsheet

                          I guess it could be even more smoother
                          Thanks sir
                          I am glad you liked it
                          Yes, I wanted to try something new

                        • Nicholas Browning

                          I'm gonna be looking for that wormhole till I die cause there's a few things that need fixing up back there in the good ole past. Just kidding, I wouldn't change it for the world. This read was wonderful, much enjoyed.

                          • spilleronsheet

                            I thought someone like me correcting the past not for others but for me. I am glad you liked it.

                          • Fay Slimm.

                            A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding idea of surreal - - great last stanza to set the mind working at what we do not yet know.

                            • spilleronsheet

                              Thanks dear Fay for your kind comments
                              Surreal questions of mine dwell all the time

                            • Garth Rakumakoe

                              The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don't we all wish we could explore... - A time travel this... Kudos to you. Very well written.

                              • spilleronsheet

                                Thank you so much dear reader
                                Sometimes time takes a toll
                                And the vast universe takes over the mind
                                We are nothing but specks in this mysterious world beside



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