I wonder
if the universe so large
how many other earth there would be ?
I wonder
if time dilation
like interstellar exists
where I might age at one place
but remain constant other place
I wonder
if there is a gravitational redshift
where the envy of green
shall be perceived as red love for me
I wonder
if I could tumble upon a wormhole
go back correct my mistakes
go to future
so I don’t make mistakes
I wonder
If there is a black hole
maybe one day we may drown upon
so that prior we are dropped
I could do, all I want to do
I wonder
how dark the universe is
is it darker than the feelings a human hide
I wonder
if light travels and bends
telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose
I wonder
if there are cosmic jets
travelling faster than light
maybe I could ride over it
travel the universe around
so many wonders I store
maybe the child isn’t suppressed anymore
some fantasies aren’t fantasies
but a reality hidden in clouds….
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spilleronsheet (
Offline) - Published: November 26th, 2021 01:10
- Category: Surrealist
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That wonder is within all of us Tkkkk.
Andy
It sure is
And I guess it’s even more in a poet
Oops, my mind went you are not Tkkkk, I apologise for my error.
Andy
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Dear Spiller , this is a Masterpiece in your writeup till date. !!
You are a person of Expression and Exploration. You have touched on so many science facts, which are real mysteries till date ..
"I am at awe at your spread of knowledge. These 2 para's touched me straight --
I wonder
how dark the universe is
is it darker than the feelings a human hide
I wonder
if light travels and bends
telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose "
Fantabulous Expression !!!
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
I am so happppy that you liked it
Well your courage pushed up a bid to bloom
So the seasons you see are dependent on the sun
To a sunflower like me
Your my sun glowing in the sky
You could take a No.7 bus and find out. It goes to the Milky Way, so I hear! heehee.
Light is said to be waves and particles. Maybe the particles make up the waves? I'm no scientist though.
Dear Orchid
Light always travels in a straight line. This property of light is known as " Rectilinear propagation of light..." !!!
Got headache now, reading all this first thing in the morning here in UK! lol.
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my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is now more than satisfied having been rigorously exercised this morning .. even though we don't yet have all the answers ... there aint nothing to stop us from dreaming .. is there .... a stellar post spilleronsheet and one I feel sure I shall return to and ponder over .... thank you .. Neville
Thanks a lot dear Neville
I wished to write something different from what I write
Normally mine are sad or reflections
But the child in me grows curious when it comes across articles as such
The universe is such a mystery that I get lost in there
Well
I am awaiting a poetry soon from you
....................... You are much more than merely welcome .. much much more, I can assure you ...
I would be surprised if there wasn't life elsewhere. Our earth is pretty perfect, as if it was built that way. Mind you, at the end of life at the mistake reading, got a feeling the line will be long.
Ohhhh
So you liked it ?
Yeah, I live sci fi
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just needs a little editing
but otherwise, this is a brilliant write! dear poet
sci-fi, poetry at its captivatingly wondrous - finest, lol
'when we loose our capacity
to wonder and dream
humanity's finality: begins'
I guess it could be even more smoother
Thanks sir
I am glad you liked it
Yes, I wanted to try something new
I'm gonna be looking for that wormhole till I die cause there's a few things that need fixing up back there in the good ole past. Just kidding, I wouldn't change it for the world. This read was wonderful, much enjoyed.
I thought someone like me correcting the past not for others but for me. I am glad you liked it.
A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding idea of surreal - - great last stanza to set the mind working at what we do not yet know.
Thanks dear Fay for your kind comments
Surreal questions of mine dwell all the time
The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don't we all wish we could explore... - A time travel this... Kudos to you. Very well written.
Thank you so much dear reader
Sometimes time takes a toll
And the vast universe takes over the mind
We are nothing but specks in this mysterious world beside
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