Voiceless.
There exists silence not found by sound,
..........
in the heart of a desert or deep
within oceans
...........
where, mutely profound,
voiceless vibrations transmigrate
intentions that destined
for sharing gyrate with use,
...........
thus when two
human souls meet fate and exchange
first rapt greetings
they commit, tho' not aloud
but by silent speaking a transfer
of twin-flamed feelings
..........
knowing love's
secret whispers never need sound.
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Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Given an airing after some tweaking hope you enjoy this later version.
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So beautiful dear Fay
Silence does speak
At first there were no words
But only gazes around
Those eyes spoke as they opened the windows of my soul
At times silence is louder than the speech to scold
So are the words mightier than swords we hold
Well penned dear Fay
Good to know you enjoyed the read and sending my humble thanks dear friend.
I understand twin flames …. And theirs so much energy exchange between them .
A nice writing , Fay 🙂 sometimes connections between people are so strong
I agree wholeheartedly dear Rose - - connections though unspoken can seem stronger than steel when people feel twin-flamed.
I think you moved the earth's crust with this one here Fay. It is very deep, and very moving. The kind of silence that says everything. Definitely a favorite for me. Thank you so much.
You got it in one Garth - - to feel assured that the other is feeling the same sans words deserves to be given an airing methinks. Thanks masses for your visit and comment on Voiceless.
this is so seriously good Fay .. the previously unspoken, unrecorded yet unbelievably well written (if indeed tweaked) there is a familiarity here in the top left hand corner of my mind marked MSFSK for memories stored for safe keeping ................ priceless ma'am x
Yes to be sure your memory- corner has read Voiceless before Nev and I guess you would have marked it as storing safe in your list - - thanking you masses for twirling it twice round your vision - we seem to read each other's likes on some issues and that feels not at all out of keeping mon ami......x
Love as an undefinable feeling? Yes, Fay - I'd pay that one.
For me, and most likely just me, yours is possibly the only acceptable poetical representation of "Love".
You are mighty near the kind of love I wrote about here Dave and thanks for dropping by.
Good write Fay.
Oh lol, two 'Like' buttons have appeared on your poem.
That would give me a chance to 'Like' my own poems twice, on my ego trip! heehee.
Thanks for dropping by Orchi.
'but, by silent speaking
a transfer
of twin-flamed feelings'..
just a beautiful wording
of one of Nature's
most intimate, wonder's..
thank you! dear Fay
for another lovely read
You chose the phrase I thought determined the whole verse dear Mek - - thank you sincerely for all the support you give my offerings of poetry.
Cor you make a very complex thing sound so simple.
It should be simple, but it ain't.
Though, escaping from the clouds of my own experience, I'd have it your way. Hand in hand with that statement comes the old chestnut, and live my life again with that new knowledge.
Yes simple as that my dear friend - - the dream we all have of what love should be needs no verbose wording but merely deep feelings - - - thanks a load for your thoughtful comment.
The way in which you weave the words together with their impactful configurations astounds in this wonderful write. A job well done Fay. Much enjoyed.
And I much appreciate your generous review Nik - - thanks a load.
This could have been the before, of my poem. Loves young dream. Then the years go by. No, I'm going to be positive, this young love will blossom.
Yes Paul - rather than being too wordy positive action is the best way to keep love alive - - bless you the comment on Voiceless.
So very true Fay, love for each other does not need words.
Andy
Yes Andy - I guessed you would know just what the message contained about love and thank you for voicing it in this wise comment.
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