Voiceless

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Voiceless.

 

There exists silence not found by sound,
..........
in the heart of a desert or deep
within oceans
...........
where, mutely profound,
voiceless vibrations transmigrate
intentions that destined 
for sharing gyrate with use,
...........
thus when two
human souls meet fate and exchange
first rapt greetings
they commit, tho' not aloud
but by silent speaking a transfer 
of twin-flamed feelings
..........
knowing love's
secret whispers never need sound.

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  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 26th, 2021 03:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: Given an airing after some tweaking hope you enjoy this later version.
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  • Views: 40
  • Users favorite of this poem: Garth Rakumakoe
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  • spilleronsheet

    So beautiful dear Fay
    Silence does speak
    At first there were no words
    But only gazes around
    Those eyes spoke as they opened the windows of my soul
    At times silence is louder than the speech to scold
    So are the words mightier than swords we hold
    Well penned dear Fay

    • Fay Slimm.

      Good to know you enjoyed the read and sending my humble thanks dear friend.

    • Caring dove

      I understand twin flames …. And theirs so much energy exchange between them .

      A nice writing , Fay 🙂 sometimes connections between people are so strong

      • Fay Slimm.

        I agree wholeheartedly dear Rose - - connections though unspoken can seem stronger than steel when people feel twin-flamed.

      • Garth Rakumakoe

        I think you moved the earth's crust with this one here Fay. It is very deep, and very moving. The kind of silence that says everything. Definitely a favorite for me. Thank you so much.

        • Fay Slimm.

          You got it in one Garth - - to feel assured that the other is feeling the same sans words deserves to be given an airing methinks. Thanks masses for your visit and comment on Voiceless.

        • Neville


          this is so seriously good Fay .. the previously unspoken, unrecorded yet unbelievably well written (if indeed tweaked) there is a familiarity here in the top left hand corner of my mind marked MSFSK for memories stored for safe keeping ................ priceless ma'am x

          • Fay Slimm.

            Yes to be sure your memory- corner has read Voiceless before Nev and I guess you would have marked it as storing safe in your list - - thanking you masses for twirling it twice round your vision - we seem to read each other's likes on some issues and that feels not at all out of keeping mon ami......x

          • Doggerel Dave

            Love as an undefinable feeling? Yes, Fay - I'd pay that one.
            For me, and most likely just me, yours is possibly the only acceptable poetical representation of "Love".

            • Fay Slimm.

              You are mighty near the kind of love I wrote about here Dave and thanks for dropping by.

            • orchidee

              Good write Fay.
              Oh lol, two 'Like' buttons have appeared on your poem.
              That would give me a chance to 'Like' my own poems twice, on my ego trip! heehee.

              • Fay Slimm.

                Thanks for dropping by Orchi.

              • L. B. Mek

                'but, by silent speaking
                a transfer
                of twin-flamed feelings'..
                just a beautiful wording
                of one of Nature's
                most intimate, wonder's..
                thank you! dear Fay
                for another lovely read

                • Fay Slimm.

                  You chose the phrase I thought determined the whole verse dear Mek - - thank you sincerely for all the support you give my offerings of poetry.

                • dusk arising

                  Cor you make a very complex thing sound so simple.
                  It should be simple, but it ain't.

                  Though, escaping from the clouds of my own experience, I'd have it your way. Hand in hand with that statement comes the old chestnut, and live my life again with that new knowledge.

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Yes simple as that my dear friend - - the dream we all have of what love should be needs no verbose wording but merely deep feelings - - - thanks a load for your thoughtful comment.

                  • Nicholas Browning

                    The way in which you weave the words together with their impactful configurations astounds in this wonderful write. A job well done Fay. Much enjoyed.

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      And I much appreciate your generous review Nik - - thanks a load.

                    • Paul Bell

                      This could have been the before, of my poem. Loves young dream. Then the years go by. No, I'm going to be positive, this young love will blossom.

                      • Fay Slimm.

                        Yes Paul - rather than being too wordy positive action is the best way to keep love alive - - bless you the comment on Voiceless.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        So very true Fay, love for each other does not need words.

                        Andy

                        • Fay Slimm.

                          Yes Andy - I guessed you would know just what the message contained about love and thank you for voicing it in this wise comment.



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