Exchange.
And a daze of breathless churning took
hold as lips touched in exchange.
Desire fanned two frequencies as flame
and fever drew skin close to skin.
A flood of longing surged through veins
while pulses hammered within.
Like chain lightning passion burnt holes
in lines of pre-planned defense.
Currents sparked and sizzled as control
bent to intention of pleasure.
This was no ordinary kiss and his gaze
saw her eyes reflect the same.
Layers of silky sighs migrated as potent
explosion ignited sensation.
And perfume of sacred exchange began
rising like never before.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hope you enjoy this bit of gentle erotica to warm up a weekend of colder weather.
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Comments8
what could possibly be better than that ... said it all so she has .... and said so well ...................x
You recognised it then - - good -- and you spoil me you do - -- - - - good.......x
A bit of Saturday erotica to stir the loins. Are you allowed to use loins on this site? Anyway, I think they both came together in splendid harmony.
Ha - -- loins are allowed here methinks Paul - -well we all have them - --thanks for calling in and am so glad you like the harmony in this bit of weekend erotica
Well, I'm glad some one(s) are having fun!
I've fainted now. It's too much for me. Neville knows it would be! lol.
Why not have a lie down and recover my friend - - - Neville would understand I am sure....... just joking of course but thank you for dropping by for a read of Exchange
Yes lol - will have to recover. They say to me: 'Ohh, live a little; get your coat and get out more; be a dark horse'; etc!
Lovely capture here. The magic of two souls wanting again to share, taking and giving of pleasure. The mutual sharing, pleasures of receiving and the knowing of this union finds what you both are.
Magic for happens for sure in moments as mentioned in Exchange -- -and I agree Dusk that giving and receiving is what true union is all about
Phew Fay! A hot one! Bring it on - the weather is cold here......
Ha - - thought that would give readers a warm now the winter has brought a few shivers....... appreciate your read and review of Exchange and thank you dear Lorna.
Beautiful words showing that kiss can be so overwhelmingly passionate Fay.
Andy
Gentleness is in your words, heat was in the way I perceived, had to step out into the cold
An heated exchange definitely. I love how you mold the unseen into clear view here Fay. Beautifully written.
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