Exchange

Fay Slimm.

 

Exchange.

 

And a daze of breathless churning took 

hold as lips touched in exchange.

 

Desire fanned two frequencies as flame 

and fever drew skin close to skin.      

A flood of longing surged through veins

while pulses hammered within.

             

Like chain lightning passion burnt holes         

           in lines of pre-planned defense.                 

Currents sparked and sizzled as control

bent to intention of pleasure.

                

This was no ordinary kiss and his gaze

saw her eyes reflect the same.

Layers of silky sighs migrated as potent

explosion ignited sensation.

 

And perfume of sacred exchange began

rising like never before.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 27th, 2021 04:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hope you enjoy this bit of gentle erotica to warm up a weekend of colder weather.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville


    what could possibly be better than that ... said it all so she has .... and said so well ...................x

    • Fay Slimm.

      You recognised it then - - good -- and you spoil me you do - -- - - - good.......x

    • Paul Bell

      A bit of Saturday erotica to stir the loins. Are you allowed to use loins on this site? Anyway, I think they both came together in splendid harmony.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ha - -- loins are allowed here methinks Paul - -well we all have them - --thanks for calling in and am so glad you like the harmony in this bit of weekend erotica

      • orchidee

        Well, I'm glad some one(s) are having fun!
        I've fainted now. It's too much for me. Neville knows it would be! lol.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Why not have a lie down and recover my friend - - - Neville would understand I am sure....... just joking of course but thank you for dropping by for a read of Exchange

          • orchidee

            Yes lol - will have to recover. They say to me: 'Ohh, live a little; get your coat and get out more; be a dark horse'; etc!

          • dusk arising

            Lovely capture here. The magic of two souls wanting again to share, taking and giving of pleasure. The mutual sharing, pleasures of receiving and the knowing of this union finds what you both are.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Magic for happens for sure in moments as mentioned in Exchange -- -and I agree Dusk that giving and receiving is what true union is all about

            • Lorna

              Phew Fay! A hot one! Bring it on - the weather is cold here......

              • Fay Slimm.

                Ha - - thought that would give readers a warm now the winter has brought a few shivers....... appreciate your read and review of Exchange and thank you dear Lorna.

              • Goldfinch60

                Beautiful words showing that kiss can be so overwhelmingly passionate Fay.

                Andy

              • SureshG

                Gentleness is in your words, heat was in the way I perceived, had to step out into the cold

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                An heated exchange definitely. I love how you mold the unseen into clear view here Fay. Beautifully written.



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