Muse alert….. Sorry – My Mistake

Doggerel Dave



Please ignore the obvious – this is me

As I try to produce some poetry….

What about him - a role model? Let's see....

When he has it done you can feel his glee:

Screaming Jay’s example guides what I do -

It’s effort not my muse which gets me through.

 

  • Author: Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 28th, 2021 03:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is a serious attempt to meld music and poetry forming a synthesis of conjoining realities thus creating a unified cohesive whole with qualities which would include a fresh dimensional aspect………… yeh – I got that, but it’s terrible hard to get rid of though, the medication just ain’t working…..
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Comments6

  • dusk arising

    Deliverence!

  • Lorna

    Hoping you feel better soon! ha ha......

    • Doggerel Dave

      I'm overwhelmed by your care and concern there Lorna...................

    • Nicholas Browning

      Destruction is nigh!

      • Doggerel Dave

        'Bit of a downer there Nicholas......

      • SureshG

        So that’s what I’ve been missing, while waiting for my muse. A fine example of a true poetry

        • Doggerel Dave

          Not sure about that, Suresh - but I did my best and no one can ask for more .

        • Goldfinch60

          So your muse is exposed at last Dave!

          Andy

          • Doggerel Dave

            Nah, Andy – You haven’t given due weight to my carefully considered lines - Screaming Jay is an example, a mentor rather than a muse……
            So do tell – where do you place SJ in your extensive and catholic musical vocabulary?

          • Neville


            a musing ..
            made me nearly sh... meself larfin .. 🙂

            • Doggerel Dave

              I hunted around for that record (pre internet days) as I has a special person I was prepared to send it to with a particularly specific message - never found it, so they never got the feedback they so richly deserved.... (don't think they would have found it funny, somehow, but I always have..... context is all...)



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