It was as if i had wings
and to fly, this wonderous flight
through enchantment's
night forest of peaceful content,
lifted upon translucent double wings.
I see myself, as I, ..out of body,
follow this flight through wonderland
amid cool friendliness of majestic elders.
Whispering, encouraging, reassuring
a cool airy creation of serene peace.
And now,
aside a darkness of moon glazed lake
my winged lover reaches, a momentary embrace,
where a kiss of forever's promise dances upon our lips
turning to a joyous smile, then gone! are her impish eyes
and so teased by nymph agility I chase her delight,
low across the glaze, to our isle of promise.
Turning now beneath a quilt
of softening comfort,
peace eases me again
into the depths of slumber.
The reassurance of passion
becalmed my beating wings.
As jealously the forest waits.
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Re-posted here. I wish I could dream like this.
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You and me both my friend ..
I just love the way your mind and your pen work wonders sometimes .. N
Wow - what a wonder of romance your dreaming gives you my dear friend -- I cannot remember a thing as soon as shut-eye appears. What are they putting in your cocoa I wonder - great wrte again Dusk.
Chasing a nymph through an enchanted forest sounds pretty fun.
beautifully imagined
eloquently weaved
simply a joy, to read
thanks for sharing, Dusk
Beautifully Written! Why aren't all my dreams
as beautiful as yours!
Chances are it will be a greedy leprechaun
Wow, I love it. What a talented writer. This poem is fantastic. Thank you for sharing.
Hey Dusk... who's to say the dreams aren't real and life is? I'm never sure...... good one.
I would like to believe that you are just recalling a reality from a parallel universe and have brought us along on an immensely romantic journey
Wow what a wonderful imagery
Your hand played magic dear Dusk
With sparkles of wanderlust you carried to a beautiful journey
So beautiful and charming
Loved the last lines of yours
“ Turning now beneath a quilt
of softening comfort,
peace eases me again
into the depths of slumber.
The reassurance of passion
becalmed my beating wings.
As jealously the forest waits.”
Such endearing emotions rings inside my heart
So true connecting the reality of me
And what finishing lines
Marvellous
“As jealousy the forest awaits”
Beautiful words d a.
Andy
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