Where are you Mary

Neville

Where are you Mary

 

You’ve always known I’m no fan of November

so why have you left us

like this all alone .. Don’t you know,

we already miss you ..

and with your guilt on our conscience

like some permanent scar

We are just another series of disasters, merely

waiting for December to happen ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 30th, 2021 03:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: For my Mother ..
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Laura🌻.
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Comments10

  • spilleronsheet

    Very emotional dear Neville
    This is a question I ask to my grandmother
    I miss her
    I can feel it

    • Neville



      thank you for visiting these words .. thank you both kindly & true ......................... Neville

    • Nicholas Browning

      I feel the desolation and it resonates. A beguiling read and much enjoyed.

      • Neville



        ..................................................... thank you Nicholas ... much appreciated .. Neville

      • Lorna

        Oh the hurt..... it never leaves. Very touching Neville.....

        • Neville



          thank you Lorna .. you are absolutely write .. it never does ................... Neville

        • Fay Slimm.

          The missing is permanent when love has to leave us - the searing hurt of losing your mother weeps through every word here ........x

          • Neville



            thank you for your understanding dear Fay ........................... N x

          • L. B. Mek

            somehow,
            a gust of mourning's wind
            that's not mine, to emote
            or partake - in, invaded
            and I had watery eyes, while reading
            your lines
            (I'm sorry for your loss, my friend
            may, she forever: rest in peace)

            • Neville



              thank you so much L.B ............................................................. N

            • orchidee

              A sensitive write N.
              Yes, December will be disastrous. It's one of the times I sing even more! heehee. Who is Carol? What is her surname? Put that gin away Orchi! lol.

              • Neville



                thank you Orchidee ............................................................ N

              • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                Sorry for your loss . A sad but nicely expressed writing ..

              • Laura🌻

                Neville,

                Today is one of those days for ‘us’ to weep, to grieve, to hurt, to commiserate, to cope with our loss, to focus on the happy moments we shared, tell her how much she’s loved, and that one day we will be together again. Your beautifully penned poem is very relatable. May they both Rest In Peace.♥️♥️

                Laura🌻

                • Neville



                  thank you Laura .. I shall certainly try .. thank you for these words of comfort & reassurance ... N 🌻

                • Doggerel Dave

                  That was neat and easy to relate to, Nev.
                  My problem is I am talentless when it comes to condolences - words from me seem so inadequate.

                  • Neville



                    they mean a lot more than you might imagine .. am glad you could make it sir ........ Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very emotive words Neville.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      sadly, they couldn't be anything other .. thank you Andy .......... Neville



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