Where are you Mary
You’ve always known I’m no fan of November
so why have you left us
like this all alone .. Don’t you know,
we already miss you ..
and with your guilt on our conscience
like some permanent scar
We are just another series of disasters, merely
waiting for December to happen ..
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Very emotional dear Neville
This is a question I ask to my grandmother
I miss her
I can feel it
thank you for visiting these words .. thank you both kindly & true ......................... Neville
I feel the desolation and it resonates. A beguiling read and much enjoyed.
..................................................... thank you Nicholas ... much appreciated .. Neville
Oh the hurt..... it never leaves. Very touching Neville.....
thank you Lorna .. you are absolutely write .. it never does ................... Neville
The missing is permanent when love has to leave us - the searing hurt of losing your mother weeps through every word here ........x
thank you for your understanding dear Fay ........................... N x
somehow,
a gust of mourning's wind
that's not mine, to emote
or partake - in, invaded
and I had watery eyes, while reading
your lines
(I'm sorry for your loss, my friend
may, she forever: rest in peace)
thank you so much L.B ............................................................. N
A sensitive write N.
Yes, December will be disastrous. It's one of the times I sing even more! heehee. Who is Carol? What is her surname? Put that gin away Orchi! lol.
thank you Orchidee ............................................................ N
Sorry for your loss . A sad but nicely expressed writing ..
thank you yellowrose .. I do so appreciate your calling on me at this most difficult of times ..
Grief is difficult to go through .
Neville,
Today is one of those days for ‘us’ to weep, to grieve, to hurt, to commiserate, to cope with our loss, to focus on the happy moments we shared, tell her how much she’s loved, and that one day we will be together again. Your beautifully penned poem is very relatable. May they both Rest In Peace.♥️♥️
Laura🌻
thank you Laura .. I shall certainly try .. thank you for these words of comfort & reassurance ... N 🌻
That was neat and easy to relate to, Nev.
My problem is I am talentless when it comes to condolences - words from me seem so inadequate.
they mean a lot more than you might imagine .. am glad you could make it sir ........ Neville
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
sadly, they couldn't be anything other .. thank you Andy .......... Neville
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