Making Rainbows Blindly

Neville

Making Rainbows Blindly

 

From the darkness of yet another hotel room

he watched her

as she scattered orange peel, amethysts and

pomegranate seeds

in the wake behind her in the street ..

Just maybe

he thought, before jumping, she might be

making rainbows

and so, instead, he chose to follow blindly ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 1st, 2021 03:55
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  • dusk arising

    The act of choosing hopefully meant he saw the options available to him. Where some see rainbows and fabled crock of gold others see talons and deep scars.

    Another Nevillesque piece to put the mind into a state of quandary.

    • Neville



      Don't ya just love the word quandary .. you can't beat it you know ........... many thanks DA ... N 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      Folk do astonishing things when watched by a potential suicide case and it looks like he jumped to chase after that rainbow - a haunt of clever intrigue caught between lines here again Nev. - - brill. write my friend...............x

      • Neville



        sadly just another night at the office my friend ... not a good time of year for many .. bless that insight of yours .. & the rest of you too of course ................................................ x

      • Lorna

        Wow - loved this one - all sorts of pictures rose up and I saw him running out the door to get to her rainbows.....

        • Neville



          go on, make my day why dont'cha .. as if you haven't already .............. thank you Lorna .. N

        • orchidee

          Hmm, it might have been me, meeting her. I can't recall it... lol.

          • Neville



            if you had, I think you probably would .................................................................. ta tho' Mr. O 🙂

          • SureshG

            … obliviously she continued to scatter the orange peels, amethyst and pomegranate seeds…..
            Loved the read

            • Neville



              thank you so very much my dear friend SureshG .................................... N

            • Goldfinch60

              Intriguing words once more Neville.

              Andy

              • Neville



                thanks Andy .................................................................. Neville

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                Sounds to me like the start of what is to be a happy ending, or a very sad one. There's no telling I guess. Very well executed Paul. Ta.

                • Neville



                  on behalf of Paul, I thank you ................... Neville 🙂

                  • Garth Rakumakoe

                    Hahahahaha... Humble apologies my friend... It is you I was looking for!



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