First Snow

Lorna



White dance

Of frozen dew

Risen from summer halcyon mornings

Now sifting through gray skies

Melting in eyes as they look up

As ever before

Sweet tasting

But still the wonderment

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 1st, 2021 05:22
  • Category: Nature
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  • dusk arising

    Lovely, your words are like a light dance upon the carpet of white.

    I wonder what surprises climate change will bring us this season. Better not put those dancing shoes away yet.

    • Lorna

      Awww how sweet...... and climate change is a worry but the nice snowplow man will help me get through. I no longer do that myself (ah bliss)......

    • Fay Slimm.

      A simply wonderful read of the magic snow brings - thank you Lorna.

      • Lorna

        Bing helped a lot...... besides all very well poetry but after a while aren't we sick of the stuff...... OK for December though!

      • orchidee

        A fine write Lorna, and a 'classical' song! I'm in the clip probably, being quite old. lol.

        • Lorna

          Oh so you CAN sing! I always suspected......

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Dear Lorna !! Few lines but conveys meaning very well !!

          • Lorna

            Thanks!

          • Neville


            you just nailed it Lorna .. it aint just children that look skyward and in awe now is it .....................

            that white dance of frozen dew does it for me every time .......... N

            • Lorna

              Who says we're not children!

            • Paul Bell

              The first snow of winter, just makes you want to go somewhere hot.
              Oh, forgot, that ain't allowed is it.

              • Lorna

                Sure it's allowed! Run if you can!

              • SureshG

                Snow has its wonders, for even the grumpiest amongst us can melt, specially when coated white in words as yours

              • Goldfinch60

                That first fall of snow can be so mesmerising - until you need to go out in it. LOL.

                Andy

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                What a beautiful picture to get lot in! 🙂



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