my body part

dusk arising

We all have our favourite
parts of our bodies
i know where mine is
because its given me
so much pleasure
ever since the first time
it felt stimulation.

 

But one has to be careful.
I mean, there are parts
of your body which, if abused,
time will punish you for.
My favourite part
has had much abuse
after wild nights drinking
leaving it sore, burning
and sometimes blistered.

 

And through my life
my tastes have changed.
Where once it was the
straightforward pleasures
which brought satisfaction
now i find i'm open for
something excitingly fresh
and dip into the exotic.

 

I have to admit though
when fully aroused
my favourite bit
has been known to be
abusive, the punisher
but fortuneately also
the conveyor of pleasure.

 

Yes all in all, there's
little to compare with the
pleasureable experiences
received by me
all in good taste
upon my tongue
my favourite body part.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 2nd, 2021 09:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Reposted for a laugh I hope.
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  • Jerry Reynolds

    Good write, Dusk.
    A morning coffee winner.

    • dusk arising

      I hope you are taking a treat of some sort with that coffee.

      • Jerry Reynolds

        I am allowed one sugar free biscuit.

      • Lorna

        Oh Dusk Orchi will be swoooonning. But oh yes, nothing beats eating for unconditional pleasure......

        • dusk arising

          I'm doing rather too much of that unconditional eating at the moment... i'm having to do that shielding thing and frankly i eat through boredom.

        • Fay Slimm.

          ha ha ha -- ever bin fooled - cos I just have - - hhhhmmm couldn't possibly repeat what I took your favourite bod-part to be Dusky you tease........

          • dusk arising

            I bet you were associating me with Rudolf and his shiney old nose eh? Maybe not. Well if I had followed through with your train of thought then just what sort of a punch-line would I have had to dream up?
            Answers on a postcard please addressed to:- Fido c/o Orchidee, MPS House, Poets Corner, Wonderland.

          • orchidee

            Yes of course - tongue. lol.

          • spilleronsheet

            Great one dear Dusk
            Now I am feeling hungry and saliva keeps running, thinking about so many delicacies
            Chocolates, Nutella and so much more
            I guess I am a glutton

            • dusk arising

              From one fatty to another.... just scoff the lot mate.

              • spilleronsheet

                Yep
                It’s day or night
                How does it matter for a foody

              • Vamsi Sudha

                Hey Dusk !! hahahahaaa
                This is a really teasing poetry, leaving us in suspense...
                Did chuckle thinking all the possibilities..:)

                • dusk arising

                  I wonder how many different possibilities you thought of?

                  • Vamsi Sudha

                    hahhahahah 🙂 A poets' wavelength can go miles you see.

                  • MDStone

                    Nice PLAY on words.

                    • dusk arising

                      Thank you, yes I was just playing with words to tease here.

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      All that fur.... You do keep it well trimmed for easy access, I hope....

                      • dusk arising

                        Dammit, you realised tongue was a typing error.

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          Yep - once I got my types sorted and realised protuberances come in all shapes and sizes....

                        • Goldfinch60

                          That taste is so wonderful in our lives d a.

                          Andy

                          • dusk arising

                            You're only typing that to curry favour!

                          • Rozina

                            Hehehe I guessed wrongly! Thank you for this funny clever poem!



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