dusk arising

my body part

We all have our favourite
parts of our bodies
i know where mine is
because its given me
so much pleasure
ever since the first time
it felt stimulation.

 

But one has to be careful.
I mean, there are parts
of your body which, if abused,
time will punish you for.
My favourite part
has had much abuse
after wild nights drinking
leaving it sore, burning
and sometimes blistered.

 

And through my life
my tastes have changed.
Where once it was the
straightforward pleasures
which brought satisfaction
now i find i'm open for
something excitingly fresh
and dip into the exotic.

 

I have to admit though
when fully aroused
my favourite bit
has been known to be
abusive, the punisher
but fortuneately also
the conveyor of pleasure.

 

Yes all in all, there's
little to compare with the
pleasureable experiences
received by me
all in good taste
upon my tongue
my favourite body part.

Comments11

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Good write, Dusk.
    A morning coffee winner.

    • dusk arising

      I hope you are taking a treat of some sort with that coffee.

      • Jerry Reynolds

        I am allowed one sugar free biscuit.

      • Lorna

        Oh Dusk Orchi will be swoooonning. But oh yes, nothing beats eating for unconditional pleasure......

        • dusk arising

          I'm doing rather too much of that unconditional eating at the moment... i'm having to do that shielding thing and frankly i eat through boredom.

        • Teddy.15

          Lmao πŸ˜‚ you are the bloomin Devil, all the way through I had Nutella in mind. I was right! Good luck with this one, I'm keeping a close eye on you Dusky! πŸ’–

          • dusk arising

            Time to roll over and growl at me again Teddybear. Just remember, he maybe old and bearded, but if you smile sweetly i'm sure you'll find santa still has few goodies left in his sack to warm your heart.

            • Teddy.15

              LOL you are simply fabulous Dusk. Inspiring in every way. πŸ’–

            • Fay Slimm.

              ha ha ha -- ever bin fooled - cos I just have - - hhhhmmm couldn't possibly repeat what I took your favourite bod-part to be Dusky you tease........

              • dusk arising

                I bet you were associating me with Rudolf and his shiney old nose eh? Maybe not. Well if I had followed through with your train of thought then just what sort of a punch-line would I have had to dream up?
                Answers on a postcard please addressed to:- Fido c/o Orchidee, MPS House, Poets Corner, Wonderland.

              • orchidee

                Yes of course - tongue. lol.

              • spilleronsheet

                Great one dear Dusk
                Now I am feeling hungry and saliva keeps running, thinking about so many delicacies
                Chocolates, Nutella and so much more
                I guess I am a glutton

                • dusk arising

                  From one fatty to another.... just scoff the lot mate.

                  • spilleronsheet

                    Yep
                    It’s day or night
                    How does it matter for a foody

                  • Vamsi Sudha

                    Hey Dusk !! hahahahaaa
                    This is a really teasing poetry, leaving us in suspense...
                    Did chuckle thinking all the possibilities..:)

                    • dusk arising

                      I wonder how many different possibilities you thought of?

                      • Vamsi Sudha

                        hahhahahah πŸ™‚ A poets' wavelength can go miles you see.

                      • MDStone

                        Nice PLAY on words.

                        • dusk arising

                          Thank you, yes I was just playing with words to tease here.

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          All that fur.... You do keep it well trimmed for easy access, I hope....

                          • dusk arising

                            Dammit, you realised tongue was a typing error.

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              Yep - once I got my types sorted and realised protuberances come in all shapes and sizes....

                            • Goldfinch60

                              That taste is so wonderful in our lives d a.

                              Andy

                              • dusk arising

                                You're only typing that to curry favour!

                              • Rozina

                                Hehehe I guessed wrongly! Thank you for this funny clever poem!



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