Evolving

Fay Slimm.

 

Evolving.

 

Wholeness swirls around encircled senses

to mend broken contact with souls

cursed by separation.     

 

Wordless but vibration-powered the core

by evolving rouses awed knowledge

of cosmic's wired wisdom.

 

Earthlings not yet seeing through mirrors 

clearly view dimly the healing change

in unfolding awareness.

 

Humans may then discover a potential

for other-dimension interconnection 

by simple telepathy.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 6th, 2021 04:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: Reflecting on what evolving might mean - - who knows - - but hope you enjoy
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Lorna

    Good images of people trying to evolve Fay - if they make it that long!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Your comment reminds us that trying is what wins in the end when evolving . Thanking you Lorna for dropping by for a read and for this thoughtful comment.

    • L. B. Mek

      telepathy of empathy, maybe?
      allowing ourselves to commune
      with the universe that surrounds us
      and maybe even, delve
      within the mysteries
      of our intuitive: Nature...
      'Wholesome Swirls
      of
      Unfolding Awareness'
      how memory-engraved poetic,
      you unfurl your message, dear Fay

      • Fay Slimm.

        You make some deep and thoughtful comments here on evolving my friend - your reviews are always welcome and thank you for this little gem.

      • AuburnScribbler

        Masterfully written here Fay, very much like a dictionary definition, but in poetic form.

        Let's hope we can all learn from our mistakes, and evolve to be better beings.

        Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Yes all is well here and I agree with your comment my literary friend - - learning from past mistakes should take us a degree or two toward better things as part of evolving. Thank you loads for your considered comment.

        • Neville


          You took the words write out of my mouth .. or maybe I should have said pen ... although mouth sounds so much more .... but then you knew that was coming didn't thee dear lady Fay ....................... x

          • Fay Slimm.

            Yup mi amigo -- -- I knew that was coming and mouth sounds the better so it does mine daringly gallant Sir Neville for in practicing that very telepathy I could have said thus " thou knewest too that I knew thou knewest " - - -- oooooh - -- this evolving means interconnection for sure................x

            • Neville



              ....................................................... of course, intercourse perhaps 🙂 x

            • Goldfinch60

              True words Fay, telepathy seems to work in many ways.

              Andy



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