Evolving.
Wholeness swirls around encircled senses
to mend broken contact with souls
cursed by separation.
Wordless but vibration-powered the core
by evolving rouses awed knowledge
of cosmic's wired wisdom.
Earthlings not yet seeing through mirrors
clearly view dimly the healing change
in unfolding awareness.
Humans may then discover a potential
for other-dimension interconnection
by simple telepathy.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: December 6th, 2021 04:52
- Comment from author about the poem: Reflecting on what evolving might mean - - who knows - - but hope you enjoy
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- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments5
Good images of people trying to evolve Fay - if they make it that long!
Your comment reminds us that trying is what wins in the end when evolving . Thanking you Lorna for dropping by for a read and for this thoughtful comment.
telepathy of empathy, maybe?
allowing ourselves to commune
with the universe that surrounds us
and maybe even, delve
within the mysteries
of our intuitive: Nature...
'Wholesome Swirls
of
Unfolding Awareness'
how memory-engraved poetic,
you unfurl your message, dear Fay
You make some deep and thoughtful comments here on evolving my friend - your reviews are always welcome and thank you for this little gem.
Masterfully written here Fay, very much like a dictionary definition, but in poetic form.
Let's hope we can all learn from our mistakes, and evolve to be better beings.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
Yes all is well here and I agree with your comment my literary friend - - learning from past mistakes should take us a degree or two toward better things as part of evolving. Thank you loads for your considered comment.
You took the words write out of my mouth .. or maybe I should have said pen ... although mouth sounds so much more .... but then you knew that was coming didn't thee dear lady Fay ....................... x
Yup mi amigo -- -- I knew that was coming and mouth sounds the better so it does mine daringly gallant Sir Neville for in practicing that very telepathy I could have said thus " thou knewest too that I knew thou knewest " - - -- oooooh - -- this evolving means interconnection for sure................x
....................................................... of course, intercourse perhaps 🙂 x
True words Fay, telepathy seems to work in many ways.
Andy
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