Dark

Lorna



Winter’s white

Belies the fact

That it is Dark’s season

That he is master

That he has no mercy

For the light

But encourages shadows

As we shrink into ourselves

He is a foretaste of death

Some of the cold to come

That Spring will not follow

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 6th, 2021 05:06
  • Category: Reflection
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  • L. B. Mek

    oh my dear
    these words read frighteningly bleak, I think
    I mean, call a spade a spade
    rightfully:
    winter is indeed, dark and bleak
    I agree,
    but why take away our Spring of hope
    in your verse,
    come now, allow us that
    at least... lol
    thanks for sharing, a fun read
    (home you don't mind me indulging in a light hearted interpretation of your work)

  • Neville



    they just dont get much starker than this .. and that's one hell of a bloomin compliment, I can tell ya ............... N


    • Lorna

      I'd better lighten up I think.....

    • orchidee

      Oohh, only two weeks before it starts getting lighter again. Don't use up the extra minute or two of light all at once! lol.
      We might welcome that, but not fancy 'Only two weeks of Summer left'.

      • Lorna

        Yes thanks for that uplifting reminder Orchi! I didn't really mean for this to be as gloomy as it turned out. Xmas lights help!

        • orchidee

          Well, it was a rainy day here. It turned dark about 1pm for a while. Who put the lights out?! lol

        • SureshG

          Winters death, so apropos, for nature itself has provided the shroud of white.
          Beautifully penned

          • Lorna

            Thanks Suresh - maybe better if I don't get so dark too often... I think it's bad for people..... ha

            • SureshG

              Be yourself first and foremost, and the rest will adjust

            • Goldfinch60

              That 'master' may be there at the moment but we know that it will soon be dispersed when the glory of Spring arrives as arrive it will.

              Andy



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