The twighlight period just before night
An in-between place that I so revere
When the lights start glowing upon the street
And anxiousness fills listless air
Where the allure of shadows and unlit spaces
Create a beguiling atmosphere
It is here I will find inception
Evening's mystical premiere
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Eugene S. (Pseudonym) (
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Nice rhythm here. I love twilight 🙂
Thank you for reading. I was trying to relate somehow a feeling I sometimes get at that time of day. That's as close as I can get.
I think you've conveyed that very well. 🙂 I too get a similar feeling at that time of day!
May that premiere lead you into the wonder of the night time.
Andy
I found the night and was determined to do so, no less...🥱😴! Thanks for reading.
a wonderful showcasing of technical prowess,
succinct wording with such melancholic depth..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
I wish I could truly live up to such standards. Thank you nonetheless.
You took a picture of twilight's soul with your words there, fellow writer. An umistakable depiction. Compelling, with strong imagery that stays long after the reading is done. Master craftsmanship.
Thanks for the encouraging words and thanks for reading.
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