Something of a Quandary
If a poem is just a song
without a tune
What name might I then pin
upon the sky
With neither sun nor moon
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Author:
Neville (
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Hhhmmm - -- interesting quandary this Nev. - -- methinks the name Omen might suit - as it is a foretoken of rune-tunes to come.............x
Upon that very noun then, I shall ponder ........................ thank you for your illuminating contribution to this page my lady ...................................................... x
Zen agen, Nev....?
........................................................... Yep ....................................................... 🙂
An nutting wrong with that if it keeps upstairs stimulated....
Brilliant!
'soldiers of Poesy: unite
here be our banner, our war cry
as disclaimer to irrelevancy
all is fair:
in imagery and metaphor..'
I was once asked what's a metaphor .. I replied, for sharing between friends ............ cheers L.B 🙂
………..Heaven, almighty Heaven,………
I wish I had something to contribute
the fact you stopped by is contribution enough .. thank you S .... N
I met her for a reason - to write poetry together. There's metaphor explained for ya! lol.
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STARS of course!
well that's that then ... you can choose the goldfish, coconut or cigar ............................... 🙂
Ah, that word again.
For me the sky is blank music manuscript... a backdrop to the score of life under which our dance steps play out our existence.
I just knew you woz gonna say that ........................................... cheers DA .. Have a splendid DA 🙂
Blue or grey, or a lonely sky ? Nice writing )
a perfectly poemed review .. bless you yellowrose 🙂
It made me think … )
Good question. Then, we must ask, is the sky REALLY a sky without the sun or the moon. What are we looking at here, where have we gone... 😛
.. we shall just have to wait & see, won't we ........................................ maybe .. Prost mein Freund 🙂
Infinity.
Andy
and beyond ............................................................................................. cheers Andy 🙂
This is deep with a message, and at four in the morning it's going to come to me. I'm thinking, the sky is a lover in waiting.
what a perfectly poetic premise ................... 🙂
Holly quanday. Neville is the answer.
my word you made me smile so wide I thought the top of my head might fall off .. bless you dear friend ...................................... Neville
What’s the sky without sun and moon adorning it
What’s the sun and moon if it doesn’t have sky to home it
For me it means lovers in embrace of each other
Like poetry a mother and song a child
How beautifully you expressed
Wonder if some poetries so subtle lost the chance to home a song
Whether they should be worth upon
Random thoughts dwell inside
My long comments loose their track
And my eyes get captivated by your words storing a millions of interpretations inside
Your truly a man of millions emotions beautifully expressed by the chosen words
thank you ... other than that, I am speechless ............................. N 🙂 x
You seen any e'ermores about?!
Why did I chip in this utterly useless comment?
You may reply 'You said it, not me!' lol.
I wouldn't want to know as there could never be works of art like yours!
Great stuff
you are too kind by half kind sir ... tis so bloomin great to see you back here my friend .. wishing you & all those you love and hold dear a flippin fantastic christmas & then some ..... Neville 🙂
Right back at ya! And thank you
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