Neither a coal to leave a dark impression
to fuel the inside
Nor a diamond to sparkle on finger
nothing but a sack of carbon
Wonder this composition of carbon with so much around
sparkles the diamond one day
a mere carbon, I must say….
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Makes me think of emptiness … atleast that’s my thoughts whilst reading this poem … that feeling of emptiness we get , when we just want to feel so much more
A nice writing )
Thank you so much rose
Maybe carbon is empty
Maybe it can encompass so much more
It’s fascinating how the element of carbon behaves
Sure emptiness is a way that many a soul feels a nowadays
I certainly can feel that way , sorry your feeling sad … emptiness can be filled sometimes , I guess … with nice feelings , maybe like that diamond you mention
Eventually it will be filled
I guess time is a great healer
Good write S.
Thanks Orchi
It's what we are, carbon and water. Oh and there's that spirit thing too. But what an incredible thing carbon is.... we are stardust.
A thought provoking piece spiller.
Sure carbon is a wonderful thing
We born carbon and one day we settle as carbon
Dear spiller !!
You brought the base of Diamond, Carbon. Every carbon does not turn to be a diamond. Carbon in high stress and heat turns out a diamond.
Same way....let the carbon of you turn to be diamond !! its time now, you have taken the heat and stress !! You are turning a diamond soon...:)
Thank you so much dear Vamsi
Yes I don’t mind being a coal too nevertheless being a diamond is a great deal
Maybe yes heat and stres taken enough
Now it’s time to enter the arena and beat the carbons around
Conquer as a carbon one day
Lol
I got too much into chemistry
And we can burn carbon! Makes a wonderful barbeque...... who needs thee diamonds..... let's be useful and burn for heat!
So true
That’s how versatile carbon is
In or out
Within or in others
Use it to burn it
Use it to shine
Or simply let it refine
We may be just carbon and water but each day of our lives we sparkle like diamonds as we are still here.
Andy
A very correct statement dear Andy
Thanks a lot for stopping by
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