Red

Lorna



Seething anger

Volcanic fires

Stars exploding

Hot sparks in the dark of night

Dresses colored to incite

Passions inflamed

Arteries pulsing

Red rivers of Life

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 9th, 2021 04:01
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • woundedheart

    Such vibrant imagery in such brevity. Very pretty

    • Lorna

      Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked.

    • dusk arising

      Woaaah there gal..... such passion! Wonderful and succinct expressions of what makes the pulse race.

      • Lorna

        And it all started with just one little word.

      • AL17

        Red truly is the embodiment of passions too strong to be expressed in words.
        Lovely writing.

        • Lorna

          Thank you for stopping by!

        • Doggerel Dave

          And I'm trying to cool down in preparation for sleep.....

          Lot of power in that piece, Lorna.

          • Lorna

            ha ha.... evil me...........

          • Draven

            a passion fueled poem. Nice 😉

            • Lorna

              Glad you liked it Draven.... I wonder what purple would have done!

              • Draven

                You'll have to write it and see!

              • spilleronsheet

                Great one dear Lorna
                That’s the red flowing in veins
                That’s the one burning the flames
                Loved the way you used strong imagery, such apt words
                Well crafted

                • Lorna

                  Ha ha.... now I know where everyone's mind is at! Thanks for liking.....

                  • spilleronsheet

                    Well
                    Yeah red is not all about love I assume
                    It’s a powerful colour
                    One with rage
                    One with anger
                    One with passion
                    One with obsession
                    One with destruction
                    Not the last yet least, with love too

                    • Lorna

                      Yes that's sort of what I was thinking!

                    • orchidee

                      Good write Lorna.
                      Oohh, I can't have too much passion! Swoon! lol.

                      • Lorna

                        Don't let the dog read it!

                      • Neville



                        He likes it .. he likes it a lot ...

                        • Lorna

                          He he he is a very funny man.......

                        • Paul Bell

                          Okay, I'm thinking this argument was contrived to set the scene, and by the words, the scene exploded at the end.
                          As your neighbour of course, could you keep the noise down.

                        • Quijote

                          A supernova of passion ignited in this one Lorna ⚡️ 🔥 💥

                          • Lorna

                            I hope no one exploded! Thanks William...

                            • Quijote

                              Lol you never know 😉

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Passionate words Lorna.

                              Andy

                              • Lorna

                                The paper caught fire while I was writing - words are best passion these days Andy....

                              • Laura🌻

                                Lorna,

                                Wow 😮…what an explosion! 💥

                                Laura🌻



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