Great one dear Lorna
That’s the red flowing in veins
That’s the one burning the flames
Loved the way you used strong imagery, such apt words
Well crafted
Well
Yeah red is not all about love I assume
It’s a powerful colour
One with rage
One with anger
One with passion
One with obsession
One with destruction
Not the last yet least, with love too
Okay, I'm thinking this argument was contrived to set the scene, and by the words, the scene exploded at the end.
As your neighbour of course, could you keep the noise down.
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Such vibrant imagery in such brevity. Very pretty
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked.
Woaaah there gal..... such passion! Wonderful and succinct expressions of what makes the pulse race.
And it all started with just one little word.
Red truly is the embodiment of passions too strong to be expressed in words.
Lovely writing.
Thank you for stopping by!
And I'm trying to cool down in preparation for sleep.....
Lot of power in that piece, Lorna.
ha ha.... evil me...........
a passion fueled poem. Nice 😉
Glad you liked it Draven.... I wonder what purple would have done!
You'll have to write it and see!
Great one dear Lorna
That’s the red flowing in veins
That’s the one burning the flames
Loved the way you used strong imagery, such apt words
Well crafted
Ha ha.... now I know where everyone's mind is at! Thanks for liking.....
Well
Yeah red is not all about love I assume
It’s a powerful colour
One with rage
One with anger
One with passion
One with obsession
One with destruction
Not the last yet least, with love too
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Good write Lorna.
Oohh, I can't have too much passion! Swoon! lol.
Don't let the dog read it!
He likes it .. he likes it a lot ...
He he he is a very funny man.......
Okay, I'm thinking this argument was contrived to set the scene, and by the words, the scene exploded at the end.
As your neighbour of course, could you keep the noise down.
A supernova of passion ignited in this one Lorna ⚡️ 🔥 💥
I hope no one exploded! Thanks William...
Lol you never know 😉
Passionate words Lorna.
Andy
The paper caught fire while I was writing - words are best passion these days Andy....
Lorna,
Wow 😮…what an explosion! 💥
Laura🌻
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