Taken Into Peace.

Goldfinch60



There I was,

The concert was over,

We had sung our hearts out,

The audience were in raptures,

We were in raptures,

It was such a success,

Such a wonderful evening,

A complete success.

 

It was such hard work

Getting things ready,

Then tidying things away,

But it had been a wonderful evening.

Now I was so tired,

Back home I went,

Changed into comfortable clothes,

Poured out a large whisky

And just sat and relaxed, listening,

Listening to music,

But not just any music

I needed something special,

Something to take me into paradise.

So I listened to Mozart,

Listened to his piano sonatas.

They took me away,

Away to a world of wonder

Where peace and beauty reigned,

Reigned in my life

And relaxation took me into my peace.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 12th, 2021 02:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: The concert was a complete success, so wonderful to sing to an audience after nearly two years.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 40
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Comments8

  • Vamsi Sudha

    Nice Write Gold !!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you VS.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.
      You could have ended the day with half an hour of my singing on a recording. But it would have given you nightmares! lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

        Andy

      • spilleronsheet

        Happy to hear that all was well
        Mozart is truly epic
        It’s soothing for me to hear the sonatas

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you spilleronsheet. Mozart is wonderful I have all his recorded music in my collection.

          Andy

        • Rozina

          Congratulations! And for the restful poem you shared.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Rozina, my absolute pleasure.

            Andy

          • Lorna

            Oh Andy it's so nice to know you have such wonder in your life so you can still find happiness! This made me smile.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Lorna, yes happiness is always their in my life. Keep smiling.

              Andy

            • dusk arising

              All the hard work paid off, the congratulations come and the friendly audience slowly fade into the night leaving you pleased but tired with work still to do. Eventually the worth and comfort sit well as you relax and take stock. Your poem covers all this so well and what a pleasure it is to read. Merry christmas Mr Goldfinch, always giving of yourself and your talents.

              • Goldfinch60

                So very true d a. It was a great evening and all the hard work was worth it to see the reaction from the audience and indeed the choir.
                Merry Christmas to you as well d a.

                Andy

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                Through your words, I was there with you Andy, and boy, what a fine day it was! You transported me sir.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Garth, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • woundedheart

                  Glad to hear not only that it was a success but also how much you enjoyed it. Whiskey and Mozart better than Brahms and Liszt 😂

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you WH.

                    Yes I did not get Brahms and Liszt but I did drink whisky which is from Scotland, NOT whiskEy which is from Ireland.

                    Andy



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