Two fragrances surround
with two personalities around
contrasting and conflicting
merging and submerging
two highlights in air
when spectators look in awe
two fragrances bottled
different when seen
two fragrances atomising
different when feeling
one musky and sweet
sensational in its spirit
causing the mellow in air
setting upon dusk itself
other sweet and earthy
humble to its ground instead
wishing to bloom in a wild part instead
the freshness it instils
minty as it stays
these two different apart
yet so sweet mingling in every part
combine and recombine
who could say
two different fragrances surround the air
like a glass
Half filled with water
like a glass
half filled with air
the water and air mingling instead
two fragrances
dated in different eras
yet so profound when mix in the air
Praised by all
when fill the air
those two scents dwell the minds
stealing the souls in respite
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Author:
spilleronsheet (
Offline) - Published: December 15th, 2021 12:30
- Category: Love
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- User favorite of this poem: Vamsi Sudha.
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Comments6
Wonderful piece inspired i feel by something we both read earlier but penned with elegance and panache you have a real way with words my friend, pray pen on ✒
Thank you so much dear Wondedheart
Your comments made my day
I was inspired by Mr. Neville’s poetry
So ended up writing this
Good write S.
Thanks a lot Orchi
Beautiful. The inspired and the inspirer, thank you. I am learning so much from here.
Thanks a lot dear Rozina
Good words spilleronsheet, we get inspiration from many on this site.
Andy
Indeed dear Andy
Sometimes it’s a muse
Sometimes it’s life that gets inspired by another life
the interconnectivity of matter
the likenesses in all humanity
the abundant disparity in universality,
a surreal depiction
a poetic dialectic
a serenely scenic scene..
(what a wonderful read
great to see your imagination
playing around with wordplay,
a brilliantly creative write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
That speaks volume of your appreciation sir
Indeed I was inspired
And this a muse was created
A topic and theme digression from my usual but glad you liked it
I wasn’t confident will I be able to weave something different
If a comment can be faved, I would like to fave it
Maybe a screenshot and encouragement for my future self
Thank you sir
For this wonderful appreciation
And the way you describe and read the depth of poetry speaks volume of you
Wow !! Great One Spiller ! Very deep and profound.
Liked the way you interweaved the various concepts of life !! Bravo !!
Life is always with duality. The movement from Duality to Singularity is the essence of Life...
The last lines of your comments were so wise
So true from duality to singularity
That indeed is essence
The zenith we wish to achieve
Thanks dear Vamsi for such intriguing comments
Always showing me light
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