Our Paradise.

Goldfinch60



We go through our life looking,

Looking for that place,

That place where life is wonderful,

Where troubles do not exist

And love for each other abounds.

We go on searching,

Searching for our paradise.

But what we need to realise

Is that paradise is already there,

Already there within as,

As paradise is a state of mind.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 21st, 2021 02:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just something I read recently. If you listen to the music you will be in paradise.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 38
  • Users favorite of this poem: spilleronsheet
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.
    The 'other place' is where I'm singing - for now, until all works out well. lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      IT will work out well Orchi, life always does - even your singing. LOL

      Andy

    • dusk arising

      It most definitely is but along comes the bad weather of arthritis and ouch, paradise can wait till i've been sat down for five minutes.... put the kettle on Andy.

      • Goldfinch60

        Tea or coffee d a? Any time you are able to get here.

        Andy

      • Draven

        Wonderful ♡ Love this.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Draven, much appreciated.

          Andy

        • woundedheart

          Love your state of mind GF we all create our own heaven and hell so best we make it paradise. Lovely ☺

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you WH, yes lets us all make it paradise.

            Andy

          • Neville


            Go on, bang my drum why dont'cha .. well inked & indeed otherwise true in my very own humble opinion .. N

            • Goldfinch60

              So kind Neville, very much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Rozina

              I have not seen this film. What you write is very true.

              • Goldfinch60

                The film is well worth watching Rozina.

                Thank you.

                Andy

              • spilleronsheet

                Dear Andy
                The words seemed philosophical to me
                I kept searching for it outside
                But along the years I realised nobody can give me paradise
                There is no paradise outside
                So true as you said, it resides inside
                So well inked
                Till our time hooked to earth, we shall continue the spread the paradise and nurture and cherish it meanwhile

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you for your wise words spilleronsheet, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • L. B. Mek

                  I clicked play
                  and read your words, then
                  just nodded away, thinking
                  yeah, he gets it
                  he really does!
                  thanks Andy

                  • Goldfinch60

                    So kind Mek, very mush appreciated.

                    Andy

                  • Garth Rakumakoe

                    Makes one pause and think, and stop chasing mirages. It truly does. Hangs like a centerpiece in the gallery of wisdom and truth.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you for your kind words Garth, so kind.

                      Andy



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