The Taking of Innocence
Beneath that now
famous
cheesecloth dress
Their
scattered DNA
suggests
She tried so very
hard
to cross her legs
and
hold her breath ..
Not having
once ever dreamt
of being
forced to kiss
through clenched
fists and
teeth like that before ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: it takes a lot to make me angry, but sometimes, I get angry
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- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., spilleronsheet
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Comments9
Rape would make a saint angry - this write needs reading by a far larger audience and taking a lesson from - -- into my list for further reference...............x
thank you Fay .. that'll do nicely .................................. x
I share your anger on this subject. Not least for the reputation it casts upon the innocent male majority. But of course mainly anger on behalf of the violated.
Cheers DA .................... this particular one made me weep ...................................... N
If it was not such a serious theme - it's my fault!
My version is: I made her kiss me, nothing more. Well I had just been eating garlic! lol.
................ If I were you Mr. O .. I wouldn't write another word without a lawyer being present .. N
I let KP kiss me - when I've been eating garlic, onions, cat food(?), etc! lol.
That too makes me angry, how anybody can hurt anybody else is such a dreadful thing in my mind.
Andy
the mind doth boggle ..........................................................dont it, N
Thank you for saying this.
I wish I had not felt compelled to Roz .. Many thanks to you though for checking in ...... Neville
How people can be so cruel is beyond me …. ((
there's nowt so strange as folk ................................. cheers yellowrose ......... Neville
Birds are easier to understand … and animals .. maybe ,
Least there are a lot of kind people in the world … but if only everyone was that way .. look how much nicer the world would be !
Well written with such few words. It made me feel disgusted...yet I am thankful for you for sharing.
Is it possible to include triggerwarnings?
Thanks Draven .. I dunno, I will look into that tho' ......................................................... N
Literally a bitter piece of a despicable whole, told in the most definitive of its unfolding. A poem I hate to love, but love nonetheless. Well done sir. I felt it.
Thank you kindly my friend …. N 😎👍
The closing of eyes won’t die the sad and anguish truth the society hides
A heinous crime like this boils the inner core
The respect and dignity stripes without caring about another soul
Well placed are those lines
Though tragic and pointing to inhumanity of mankind
Wish people could respect others choice
Even satan can’t define the evil those mind store
Felt sad while reading this
And yes the word anger can’t be hidden
The news lace with such incidents
Don’t know where the full stops lie
Wish the heinous devils could stop making such crimes
What a thoughtful, honest and well reasoned review Spiller, bless you my friend x
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