In the way that velvet excites
with its touch on the back of my hand
now mother nature excites my eyes
with velvet hues of boiling mercurial eastern pink scarfs
melding through lilac and purple blue ribbons
to golden crushed orange shades
draped beneath pregnant skies of morning blue
where now erupts the bright dazzling golden globe of life
as i behold the birth of magnificent dawn
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dusk arising (
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Lovely poem , dusk 🙂🙂 very nicely expressed
Thank you rose.
Good write dusk.
Thank you Orchidee.
Morning has broken indeed within this wonderfully colourful poem you capture both the scene and the readers attention, beautiful. 👏
Thanks woundedheart....difficult to find words to describe something which can be so beautiful and has been described by so many before...... but i had to have a go.
my guess is we were looking up at the very same sky & maybe, even at the very same time ................ twas glorious ....................................... N
I rarely get to see the dawn nowdays even though its a late starter in winter, its not as late a starter as i have become in my lazy lockdown immunesuppressed hiding away.
Dawn is so beautiful in our lives d a and each new one shows us another wonderful day.
Andy
Each day is a gift indeed.
Simply brilliant these poetic expressions of dawn's entrance. One for my list for sure dear Dusk.
Difficult to describe a beautiful dawn, many have done a better job but never one to run from a challenge, it's my two penneth worth. Thank you Fay.
A beautiful dawn description.
Thank you rozina.
This write drips poetic excellence DA. A charming work of art very vivid, rich, and colourful! Thank you for sharing. 🙏🏼
When a beautiful dawn is seen its poetically inspiring for us poets to have a go at. I'm sure there are many better descriptions of the birth of the brand new day and I'd do it differently next try. Thank you Garth.
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