Christmas Senryu.

Goldfinch60



Christmas was over,

A good time with family,

But she was not there.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 26th, 2021 02:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was the second Christmas I have had since my wife died.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 22
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  • Caring dove

    Sorry Andy ( has to be difficult . I’m glad you at least had a nice day

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you yellowrose, it was a good day but....

      Andy

      • Caring dove

        Yeah , I understand (

      • Vamsi Sudha

        Sad Gold, to hear this. Loved ones when they leave a leave a big hole in our lives. May time heal this hollow of your heart. !!!! Glad that you had a nice day !!

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you VS, she is always with me in my heart.

          Andy

        • orchidee

          A poignant write Gold.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Orchi.

          • woundedheart

            Dr shivago what a movie, missing someone at special events is often very deep I fear this time next year my poetry will mirror your own as my father is terminally ill. This touched my heart ☺

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you wh, so sorry to hear about your father, I am sure that you will remember the good times with him.

              Andy

            • orchidee

              Can I mention the E... word yet? Hint: eggs will be in shops soon!
              You started me off singing - it's a sort of crooning tune, sung by one of the 'classical' crooners. lol.

            • Coyote

              Powerful!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Coyote.

                Andy

              • Neville


                This little gem just made my eyes water involuntarily … I am seriously senryued sir … 💕❣️👍❤️ Neville

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you for your understanding words Neville.

                  Andy

                • Rozina

                  I am sorry to hear this.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Rozina.

                    Andy



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