Christmas Senryu.

Goldfinch60



Christmas was over,

A good time with family,

But she was not there.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 26th, 2021 02:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was the second Christmas I have had since my wife died.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 22
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Comments8

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Sorry Andy ( has to be difficult . I’m glad you at least had a nice day

  • Vamsi Sudha

    Sad Gold, to hear this. Loved ones when they leave a leave a big hole in our lives. May time heal this hollow of your heart. !!!! Glad that you had a nice day !!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you VS, she is always with me in my heart.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A poignant write Gold.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

      • woundedheart

        Dr shivago what a movie, missing someone at special events is often very deep I fear this time next year my poetry will mirror your own as my father is terminally ill. This touched my heart ☺

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you wh, so sorry to hear about your father, I am sure that you will remember the good times with him.

          Andy

        • orchidee

          Can I mention the E... word yet? Hint: eggs will be in shops soon!
          You started me off singing - it's a sort of crooning tune, sung by one of the 'classical' crooners. lol.

        • Coyote

          Powerful!

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Coyote.

            Andy

          • Neville


            This little gem just made my eyes water involuntarily … I am seriously senryued sir … 💕❣️👍❤️ Neville

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you for your understanding words Neville.

              Andy

            • Rozina

              I am sorry to hear this.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Rozina.

                Andy



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