Drowning, alone in the darkness
unable to speak, unable to think
as sorrow fills the air, suffocating lungs
not knowing how to save myself
from the anguish,
the uneasy tingle of sadness
that surrounds my being,
eyes drip unseen weeping,
craving some form of light
just one small piece of happiness
in a world spinning with suffering.
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Author:
kitty the naughty poet (
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Marshall Mathers the 3rd never took you for a slim shady fan lol. Dark but impressive words dear friend ☺
hahaha so what did you think i was into?
lol i like a massive array of music ... any recommendations welcome
If you love poetry try Leonard Cohen his songs rock try Cat Stevens , Smokie, the disturbed have a version of sound of silence to die for. I thought you more a buble or Metallica kind of gal rocker or romantic music 🎼
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Oh i almost forgot new fusion poem listed last night
lol just been on it lol
This piece brought back memories of being unfairly punished by my parents when my mind was in turmoil and my childhood brain was in a sad, angry, painful turmoil.
aww im sorry dusk i hope you are okay
Very strong write katie and so meaningful but I am sure that that one piece of light is within you and will one day fill your world with light as it has mine.
Andy
Thanks andy
A powerful write. Thank you.
Thanks for reading
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