Some truth better be untold

spilleronsheet

Truth is harsh

Piercing the ears that hear

Blinding the eyes that see

Sometimes critics are hard to please

 

 

Praises heart wish to see

To beat to the tunes of appease

But ballads are sung for heroes

Not for the fallen warriors

Not for the strugglers

Not for the survivors, who hardly breathe

 

 

 

To those critics

Let them smile today

Let the last laugh be for you

 

Surrender to higher being

Embrace the universe

Watch the stars

stars which despite dying

Continue to shine

Those stars let them be your guide

Even though those stars not fated to be

Continue to thrive

And strive

 

 

The universe is a part of you

Your the part of the universe

Maybe just an iota of the whole

But an essential part….

is it really the truth to be untold ?

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 30th, 2021 01:38
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  • Goldfinch60

    We are all part of this vast universe, maybe just an iota but we are very important to those iotas around us.

    Andy

    • spilleronsheet

      Very true
      Each drop makes an ocean
      Each of us makes the universe

    • Caring dove

      Lovely words , spiller ) nice expression . And so true ! We are part of the universe ..

      • spilleronsheet

        Indeed dear rose and no one can take away this right from us

      • Rozina

        A small cog but necessary. Very true words.

      • orchidee

        Good write S.

      • Nilanjana Singh

        Well written dear Spills.

      • dusk arising

        A reminder for friends suffering low self esteem that, as Max Ehrmann put it, "you have as much right to be here as the stars and the trees, for you are a child of the universe". Uplifting words I often coin.

        • spilleronsheet

          Such beautiful words
          What a powerful quote
          Wish I could fave this comment

          • dusk arising

            Spiller. google a piece called 'desiderata' by max ehrmann which contains my misquote. It's a piece i treasure and is so wise though obviously dated. I recomment to anyone i see who is on a downer to print it off and hang it on the toilet door..... a quiet place to read it again and again in contemplation.

            • spilleronsheet

              Thanks a lot sir
              I will google it right now
              And shall hang on my bed
              To wake up and read it every day

            • SureshG

              A speck in one form is a universe in another, it’s all relative, and most appropriated

              • spilleronsheet

                Very true
                Indeed a speck today
                But a pool for some
                But this speck makes you and me
                And we make the universe

              • Dhanya

                What you say is true my friend. What a kind way to give back to those who are under the gun sometimes. We all are trying our best to build and grow from our true being. I see your true being shining in your poem. So nothing critical is necessary. Grow on!

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thanks a lot dear friend
                  A plant maybe shy
                  A plant may be slow
                  Maybe withering without sun
                  But it will challenge the adversaries and continue to grow



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