Sated

Neville

Sated

 

At this precise moment in time

I want for nothing

Well at least nothing more than

to walk with you

again through wet green fields ..

Chasing early morning light

the way sunflowers chase light

and wondering ..

Where I might next leave my DNA ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 31st, 2021 05:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • dusk arising

    Gone are those hankerchief days of youth eh?

    You could always scratch/cut yourself on a hawthorn bush or barbed wire escaping from mischievous bovines...... deposits made.

    There's a delightful mischievous note in your poetry today.... is that a sign of a new years twinkle in your eye?.... I hope so.

    • Neville



      what a nice thought .. I hope so too ... thanks DA ............................... N

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that's a most novel way to put it - -- the title did it for me - - but what could be better than to wonder whether the wet walk will deliver a dry patch to lie and maybe exchange more than pleasantries - - am smiling big at this bit of your gift for teasingly inventive intrigue .............x

      • Neville



        Bless you Fay .................................................................. 🙂 x

      • SureshG

        Exceptionally deposited, may it flourish and blossom, and thanks for the tease

        • Neville



          cheers ............................................................................... deeply 🙂

        • Paul Bell

          Never used that as a chat up line.
          Fancy exchanging, DNA.
          No, Paul, I dumped you.
          She never liked green fields, that girl.

          • Neville



            You just got to pick yourself up buttercup & find another 😎👍

          • orchidee

            Good write N.

            • Neville


              … cheers 🍷😎👍

            • Rozina

              All the best! Happy New Year.

              • Neville



                & A Happy New year 2 U 2 ............................. 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                Keep on wondering Neville and your thoughts will come to fruition.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  thanks & a Happy New Year to You sir ................................... 🙂

                • Draven

                  Nicely written! Cheeky poem. 🙂

                  • Neville


                    ............................... thank you kindly Draven & may you have a splendid New Year 🙂

                  • Dove

                    Beautiful! Has a frisky ending, or is that my naughty imagination! Lol Happy New Year

                    • Neville



                      .................................... that'll do nicely Dove .. thank you my friend .. Here's wishing you a Happy, healthy & safe New Year too .......... N 🙂



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