Well-Being Water

orchidee



Tune: Woodlands

('Tell out my soul')

Isaiah 12 v.2-3

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Water of life you offer to us here

We come to drink of it, sparkling and clear

Your promise be that with joy we shall draw

Water out of wells of salvation sure

 

We shall rejoice and praise you with one voice

To quench our thirst your water is our choice

It flows a spring, an endless full supply

Who drinks of this resource, they ne'er shall die

 

To satisfy, to refresh, make us whole

To replenish and satiate each soul

For you the LORD JEHOVAH our strength be

Our song and salvation eternally

 

Help us so trust, not be afraid, you will

Come to us, grant us your refreshment still

Enough for all, wells deep enough to be

Fulfilling for us through eternity

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2022 03:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 10.10.10.10. metre.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 16
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  • AuburnScribbler

    It is always very important to hydrate, and this wonderful poetic reminder of yours orchidee, will ensure that all will be healthy, with a thankful heart.

    Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

    • orchidee

      Thanks AS.

    • Dove

      Beautiful! I loved it! Quench the thirst!

      • orchidee

        Thanks Dove.

      • Neville


        a most refreshing hymn poem if I may say so Mr. O ................................. Neville

        • orchidee

          Thanks N.

        • Draven

          Nicely written, and now I am thirsty.

          • orchidee

            Thanks D. Got your bucket for the well?!

            • Draven

              Yep, right here!

            • Goldfinch60

              Don't your dare put any of that water in my scotch!

              Andy

              • orchidee

                Thanks Gold. lol. So that's where I get the water from?!

              • GardenDelights

                Love your orientation toward the Lord throughout your write! Yes, he satisfies and refreshes and makes us whole! Your poem is a lovely celebration of this truth. (I know we have not met, but I think you have a discordant word that harms the beauty of your poem and I don't want that for you. Verse two, line one...did you mean 'voice'? Is this autocorrect striking again?)

                • orchidee

                  Thanks GD. Oops, yes - can't be praising the Lord with 'vice'. lol. Will correct typo.

                  • GardenDelights

                    You are most welcome. 🌿



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