the kissing breeze
took the moment
leaving unspoken words
screaming for voice
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dusk arising (
Offline) - Published: January 4th, 2022 06:04
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Oh how the mighty wind blows! Cute poem!
Thank you Dove, cute comment LOL.
yup
and just like that
our now's, become prisoners
to the whispering winds
of Time and memory...
a wonderfully succinct write, dear Poet
and Happy New Year!
Thank you LBM and wishing you a safe, healthy and rewarding new year too.
Like trying to talk on the seafront most days!
Fantastic stuff, read 3 times and like said it did get powerful each turn until the waves were back in my face!
Glad you found something in this short piece Dan.
Every line spoke an emotion and in unison it amplified
I am just awestruck by these lines…
I'm a lover of very short pieces that pack a punch. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one.
It’s an art to convey more by speaking less
I never said a word!
A haunting write, Dusk.
Thank you Jerry.
4 lines that mean so much
Thank you Rozina.
But those words will be there and one day the breeze will bring them back to be heard.
Andy
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