My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle

Dove

My heart is heavy, my soul is blue
Since the stars fell from my weary eyes
They no longer sparkle love so true

 

The glow dimmed when I lost you 
This sadness slowly materialized
My heart is heavy, my soul is blue

 

The angels in heaven slowly flew 
Down from the ebony darkened sky
They no longer sparkle love so true

 

The promises of love I once knew
The beams vanished from my eyes 
My heart is heavy, my soul is blue

 

 The Angels ascended with you
and I never got to say good-bye 
They no longer sparkle love so true

 

Now,  I mourn the love I once knew
When the stars sparkled in my eyes
My heart is heavy, my soul is blue
They no longer sparkle love so true

  • Author: Dove (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 4th, 2022 07:26
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 50
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Comments7

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Truly beautiful words … with so much sadness .

    A good poem ))

    • Dove

      Thanks! I appreciate the read!

    • Neville



      she has such a way with words does our Dove .. x

      • Dove

        Thanks Neville! 😘

      • orchidee

        A sensitive write Dove.
        If it wasn't such a sad theme - 'OK, I'll come back; dunno why I went away in the first place. Probably cos someone couldn't bear my singing!' heehee.

        • Dove

          Thanks a bunch! I'll try for a more positive poem next time! 😄

        • dusk arising

          The magic is that the beauty of those stars is something which will never leave you for if it were so, then too would the memory of finest love's beauty be gone from you.

          • Dove

            You are right DA, the stars will never leave!

            Smiles! Happy New Year!

          • Rozina

            A very sad poem, beautifully written.

            • Dove

              Thanks, I appreciate the read and comment

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful emotive words Dove.

              Andy

            • Dove

              Thanks Andy



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