Poetic Dan

What's truly earned can't be taken



She walked up with grace not letting her nerves win the race

This being only the second time to be preforming again live

To the little girl who played piano with her toes

Now writing and playing all on her own, wings nearly fully grown

No poem could convey the pride that sits with my soul

A beautiful gift to treasure watching time unfold

No one can take away what they never truly earned.

Comments7

  • dusk arising

    Well that gal is gonna go far if thats only a 2nd open mike gig Dan. Now she should do some home/portastudio recordings to build the dynamics/mic tecnique which is never easy/impossible in a pub environment cos theres too much other noise going on. Great to see she's got the confidence. You're a proud dad eh?

    • Poetic Dan

      Yes she wants to apply to preforming arts and used this to learn a bit more, someone even come up after and offered to give lessons for all that you spoke off!

      This year she will shine so bright and yes my proudness feeling like nothing else.

      Thank you my friend

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      Your lucky , Dan and I bet she’s proud of herself . Thanks for sharing video .. she has a nice singing voice )

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you and yes lucky as can be, we sung all the way home that night!

        Always appreciate your time

      • Teddy.15

        Bless her, she has a beautiful voice. Tell her to do what Adele does and tell everyone to shut up and actually listen to her gorgeous voice. 💖 I wish I was there listening. 💖

        • Poetic Dan

          Ha ha, I was in my bubble crying with pride lol
          Thank you so much for the kind words and you was there in spirit with me!

          Always appreciated

        • Rozina

          I love this. Thank you.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you kindly
            Always appreciated

          • Goldfinch60

            Super write Dan, she is going a long way in her life.

            Andy

            • Poetic Dan

              Absolutely she doesn't look like she's slowly down...
              Thank you my friend

            • spilleronsheet

              Congrats dear Dan….such a beautiful voice and it is for sure you must be proud….wonderful poetry dear poet

              • Poetic Dan

                Thank you my friend, most definitely and always appreciated

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                I have a twelve year old daughter. I can identify as a father. This piece write here, is INSPIRATION. Thank you Dan.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Ha! No no thank you and keep shining with that little lady my friend!

                  Really appreciate your time



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