Came across a rock
Looked down at it for a bit
Seemed just like my brain!
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Author:
James Michael (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 6th, 2022 19:36
- Comment from author about the poem: A little fun while drinking Guinness and reading poetry.
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maybe, we share that same
obstinate, brain
cos mine too, watches-on
blankly
as other's, all around me
morph
tempered, by the weathering
of Time
into carbonised deposits
of wisdom's, worth...
(a wonderfully relatable shorty
like how you kept to senryu's origins
by matching your topic
to your chosen form and wording, as well)
thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year! dear poet
My brain cells have been flushed down the toilet with vomit from too much booze!
Thanks as always for reading my splatterings. 5 7 5s are always fun to write. Happy days to you as well.
Great 575 - reminds me of one of mine:
a rock shining wet
unseen by upward gazing
stumble in the dark
Thanks Mikey for dropping by. You do have a gift for the shorties.
Thanks James - sadly I don't have much time to write work of any length - art takes first place and I'm currently busy with commissions on the go.
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