There were words of critics
Words condemning
words complaining
words glaring
words striking
actions of hate
figures of zeroes
question of accountability
duty of responsibility
against those the heart lived
against those the tree stood
against those plant sprouted
smiled even though cried inside
rebelling soul continued
on journey of thriving
then one fine day
there were words of praise
words of applauds
Action of cheers
season of claps
but why sudden
the soul felt heavy
the emotions burdening
to carry on responsibility
of working through the words of appreciation
the burden of doing better
it felt overwhelmed
then to feel the moment
the soul calmed
heaved a deep sigh
and exclaimed
shouted at the sky
ohhh Man you survived so far
You truly can do it
if not you, then who could do it
you vast sky
I am a star
meant to shine ….
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I love this. Such a strong message,..I'd like to go on but I'm pressed for time,just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in,lol great one🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Thanks dear fallenangel those words means a ton…addding courage to my shout
Generally in Britain, they build you up, and then they knock you down.
It really does take a thick skin these days to survive in the jungle.
That’s totally true
Thick skins can only live now
Such great words … loving your poems recently ! 🙂🙂
Thank you so much Rose
I am trying my best to give all of mine in this battle of life
I'm gonna sing, not shout! Agghhh, Oh nooooo, they say! heehee.
Well, I might shout too! lol.
Fido and teef
Will shout or sing
I question my mind
You can sing Orchi
Would love to hear one day
Thanks S. lol.
We shall always survive in our wonderful life spilleronsheet.
Andy
Yep
So true dear Andy
I think I am able to take some of your positivity aura
Dear Spiller !!
you did take the courage to shout your heart out !!
Its time you SHINE bright
And its time THINGS are all Right !!
Shine incessantly !!
Thanks dear Vamsi
I wont leave any effort not to shine
Sometimes for the brightest light the creation has to burn
I shall burn with hard work to shine and illuminate more
Inspiring. Yes we can do it. Thank you for sharing this very positive message with us.
Thanks dear Rozina
I am glad you liked it and felt inspired
Wow...I didn't take a breath all the way down until the end and take intake honestly to me by surprise.
As if I'd just be renewed, I am a star and I'll see you the other side off the moon!
Always a pleasure
That’s great we will shining together up there
Watching the planets as they move
And moon that wanes
Thanks a lot for the beautiful comment
Much appreciated
Very insightful themed piece here my friend you capture the feeling and theme perfectly ☺
Thank you so much wounded heart
It brings pleasure to me to read your praise
Thanks a lot
It adds to my courage
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