Will you still love me?
When I'm no longer in my youth?
When I'm old and wrinkly?
Will, you still love me when I can no longer do things myself and need others to help
I know I will still love you
When your back curves and your nails are brittle
I will still love you when your hair fades to grey
I know I will
But will you?
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moonbabe (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 10th, 2022 02:32
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Comments3
Love is always there for you and always will be at any age.
Andy
Wisely spoken!
Love is the great risk. Your good soul and your lover's, should they find each other, will love into eternity. Such good fortune involves such risk. Your words are straightforward, raw, conveying the angst that every soul that risks love must feel. Nicely done!
If he/she truly loves you they will endure with you,the hardships life brings with as much dedication as they indulge in it's fruits and spices. And don't worry about your old wrinkly skin,..I implore you to please read my poem called "Forever Etched" on page 3 of all my poems. It about,..well you'll see😊✌️🕊 I applaud your message here,you really hit it out of the park with the last two lines. Take a bow and shine bright 🌟🌹🌞🕊
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